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for Time Warp

by Luvan

schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by this. I lookforward to reading more.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Sparkleberry
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Very well written! PLEASE update soon!
person darkfae2
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update!! i love this story. its so beautiful and i want to know what happens next!
person Luvan
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i know its a bit Mary Sue but all the female OC's are baced off of my friends and myself. And the one thing is if you have seen fullmetal Alchemist then you may caught onto the whole Roy and Ed, both of their disciptions are baced off of that anime...i did it to add a little joke for my friends. Yet they didn't caught it either until i pointed it out. So i hope you are enjoying this story.
person BobaFett
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A bit Mary-Sue but with some minor work it could be really great fanfic.
I'm looking forward reading this fic.
person Anne
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good, keep up the good work.