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omfg, i'm crying so hard that i can hardly see where i have to type... and it's not easy to make me cry.
that was the most cruel story i've ever read. but eben if i knew it from the beginning, i couldn't get me to stop the reading.
your writing is realy good and the story you have had for the three of them was amazing.

well, to see jack as broken as here broe my heart. really..
as they were all three et the pearl, i thought maybe it will all be okay from now on. but...
the night, where the three of them slept in jacks bed togther was the happiest szene, i think. i know it's impossible, but... dunno.
and will as the captain on the pearl was so strange so believe. or... no. it wasn't strange to believe, i think he'd do well.
but i wished the whole time that jack would see, that it wouldn't be impossible for him to live on the pearl with will...
because his life with james... it was as sad as seeing jack broken. it was so false...

and then jacks death... and the ceremony at the ship...

i'm sniffing again, sitting on my bed in the middle of the night, nearly in the morning.
and i can't decide if i'm happy that i read this story or not.
it made me feel so sad (and i don't like sad things ^^°) but... it was so well written!
i realy wish i could write like you and i'd get half of the emotion for my writing like you get for yours.

i hope i can sleep this night without dreaming something obscur or so.
but at least i think it was with it. amazing story.

so take care, wish you all the best! and never stop writing, savvy? ;D

greetings,
chiisu

You made me cry like a little girl, and I have been a grown woman for some time now. When I finished reading this story I ran to my husband and clung to him for dear life. To say this was a great story or that you are a talented writer would not be giving you enough credit. The images you described were beautiful and the emotions you stirred as real as possible. A job well done. Jack Sparrow would be proud.

Oh....so sad. Everything was going so well. How can Will see Jack's flashbacks? Very interesting....Please update soon!

Absolutely loving it. Especially the fact that things aren't going easily for Jack, Will, and NOrrington. A bit more "realistic" (as realistic as fanfic can be *grin*), since people don't just instant fall in love and it's all love, luck, and lollipops.

oh...poor Jack...Its so sad!!!! *cries* Thank you for updating...even though its sad...

AH! Is that the end!? It can't be! Jack is supposed to be with Will! Obviously!