rate_review Reviews

This story was incredible.
I didn't have much time on a computer so I started reading it slowly.
Today I had a slow day at work and read chapters 4-16.
I could not stop reading it, the story is that good.
Tomoe Harada is an awesome character!

Daaaaamn! She sure took Jang'ika down a few notches, didn't she? Very impressive. I'm sure there's much more to Tomoe-chan than meets the eye. I have my suspicions, but I'll hold off voicing them for the moment until I'm sure. Definitely earned their respect. Hope you don't leave us hanging for long...I really wanna see how this ends!

(Sorry it took so many reviews last time. Been having computer troubles and was using my husband's computer infrequently. But...I'm caught up AND have a new comp, so I'll be watching this like a hawk! Take care! Please update soon! :))

Very good fic so far. You've got Jango's personality down perfectly. :) Tomoe's a feisty little thing, isn't she? Seems very good at playing cat and mouse with Fett. Two of a kind, too. There seems to be more to her than there appears...

Yeesh...poor Tomoe! Seems like the poor girl was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Though I have to wonder which fate is worse, the slavers or Fett?

Ahh, I see we've got some appearances by Vau and Skirata. That could prove juicy, particularly since Tomoe has seen that there are others there besides the Fetts. At least Jango's trying to be a bit nicer to her now, although I wonder if perhaps he's falling for her. As clever a girl as she seems to be, that could be trouble later, getting blinded by his lust. *chuckle*

They say bad things come in threes, and it looks like Tomoe's got her hands full with three Mando'ade. One has to wonder just what's with her and what Jango hopes to accomplish with her. Seems to be a lot of tension, at least where Jango and Vau are concerned. Vau might be a psychotic old bastard, but he's a SEXY old bastard. *grin* Jango, too, really. At least Vau's more the gentleman about it. *chuckle*

(Ahh, all caught up. Story's been added to my Reccommended Reading, too, so I await the next update! :))

:D nicely written

I felt it kept the imagination well and didn't get bogged down to far in setting scenes and description [i am gonna look at grammar and spelling in more detail soon]