rate_review Reviews

This story was incredible. While the sex was hot, the stotryline was concise and the characters didn't seem sporaticly having sex scenes for the sport of it. I love to read a well written piece! However, it feels unfinished. Was this the end? Jareth seemed to barely begun introducing Sarah into the castle, not her duties within the roll she is to play. I am also clueless as to what role she CAN play. Since Anna was also a changeling, now no longer welcomed to the bed as the king's bed warmer. Is Sarah to be queen? What I'm saying is....More, please! :)

That was one of the most amazing stories that I have had the pleasure to read! I loved how you made us love and hate each character and pitty them at the same time! I commend you for this masterpiece!

I am so excited to see you posting your story here. It really is an epic saga, one that beats the rest. You have an amazing talent as a writer.

Greetings Thomcats:
I am so honored that you are here in AFF.net. I read your Carnival In Venice and some other stories before on another Labyrinth page. Wow. They were wonderful! I look forward to reading the newest additions to those stories.

Sigh...
I hate writing essays for college. Wish my husband could write and submit them for me as Jareth did for Sarah. :P.