rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. You said something about a third chapter but, it isn't up yet and that was back in 07 I believe it said. I'd like to know if you were thinking about continuing this story or not. I like OC in stories, and from what I've read of this one I like it. Just wondering is all.

Oops looked at the wrong thing it was in 08 totally my bad sorry about that. I love the way you described her. I'm trying to understand how she is labeled a goddess in this first chapter but, in the second she is a girl. It would incline that she landed on earth a very long time ago and is still alive today. Ah I just created more questions for myself. I need to know! It will slowly kill me inside! Ok maybe not kill me, but it will cause me to wonder a lot.

The way you write is fantastic. The main character is described so poetically, that it just draws me in. I hope you update with more chapters eventually.

I'm curious... very curious now... I hope ya update soon. She was or is Cybertronian but... why's she a human being?
So many questions to answer! Go and write MOAR so I can get them all answered!

waiting for the next chapter. One was a bit confusing... since they called her godess she must have fallen to Earth quite a bit ago... But the second chapter was more understandable. I love how she just kicked Simmons ass.... I so wanted to do that... I don't know how but I had a funny feeling that it was going to be Rachet that ordered the search... he always knows everything -snickers-

OO ^-^ more soon pleaz

Very interesting. I can't wait to see more.