rate_review Reviews

Very well done. I really enjoyed the balance of humor with angst. It painted a realistic picture of their relationship and how as some things changed, some things never would.

Hi! Well, overall I really liked this story; enough to finish it apparently. It is definitely very very very different from the usual stories I read, because I almost always like stories in chronological order (not skipping around). However, the way you did it, made the time jumps very interesting and I think it was well done. There were a few points, especially in what Obi-Wan says, that I think were very Out Of Character, but other than that, I think the others remained mostly 'in character'. I'm happy that we eventually got to see Who 'confessed' to Who first (Obi-Wan did when he kissed Anakin).
So over all, a really good job, and a pretty original style. Thanks so much for sharing! I enjoyed it!

This is so heartbreaking! Oh please please please add more to this! Please to something about Anakin's redemption & about Anakin & Obi-wan meeting each other in the afterlife! Please!

I really enjoyed the way the flashbacks and the changes in POV kept me off kilter as to what was going on and yet gave the story excitement. It pulled me along, making me want more!

Very well done.

I have read this story quite a few times now. I must say that I absolutely love it. Every time I get to the end I have tears. Wonderful job.