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by DavetheKnave

schedule November 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait for more

person Siar
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A great story, definitely one of the best in this fandom. But... will it ever be updated?
person n. renee
schedule June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a good story please keep adding to it.
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WANTS MORES PLEASE
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tahiri, that would be literaly hell :P. Hope you update soon.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more of this needed
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. I'd love to read a chapter involving Tenel Ka, and more about Tahiri and Jaina
person jubilee
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story, i've wanted to see more since you started, but honestly the pace your writing at is beyond slow. If you were writing an epic i'd understand but a half page story over a period of years?

Just pick up the pace and have fun with it, chew through all the women from Jaina to Daala ! Use other eras and chars, we would love to see someone do the same to clone wars era women, or even KotOR !
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Impressive beginning so far. Seems to have the character's down well.

Can't wait to see how things go from here on out.
person noteven
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you came by to get it started again. I thought it merited continuation then, and your writing style and ability definitely makes it all the more striking. Please keep it up!