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by DavetheKnave

person 6196012
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story
are you gonna expand on it then
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, and very well written, you can practically feel her desperation...

And it's fucking hot!
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waiting on the second chapter.
person 6196012
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent story
can u plese complete this story plese
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see more! Keep it going.
person Seripa
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is looking good. I can't wait to see more!
person noteven
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
With such an excellent concept, I'd love to see this fic continued. You've got an excellent grasp on writing as well. It would be great to see what you could come up with on this one.
person jubilee
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise, I just want to see the girls of star wars subjected to tortures and worse ! :)
person kaleb22
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it. cant wait till next post. BTW how many jedi you planning on him taking? please say lots
person WTF
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intresting start, i would like to see where you go with this