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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is going great, can't wait to read more it it!
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May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it was perfect and the part where she finally getting it good for her
Maria
Maria
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damm! This is a good, exciting story.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far :)
keep it coming soooooooooon! :) please :P hehe
-Andie x x
keep it coming soooooooooon! :) please :P hehe
-Andie x x
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My suggestion is to not sweat the details. Just write, and enjoy it. It doesn't have to be perfect, and I guarantee I at the very least will still love it. If you keep fighting with your muse, this story will just become another that started out good, and then was never finished. I'd hate to see that, and I think a lot of other people would probably hate to see it as well.
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for you to update, this story is terrific! I love your depiction of Jareth. Hope we hear from you soon!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm bloody well lovin it!!!! OOH if i was Sarah, I know where I wuda stayed!!!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, jalepino stealing Goblins are surely the culprit.
I hope you update sooner rather than later, I'm enjoying this story.
I hope you update sooner rather than later, I'm enjoying this story.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Frustrated is a fitting title for this chapter. How torturous! I'm dying for more of his seductive distractions, but at the same time am curious about what't been happening to the labyrinth! And who was screaming up ahead? I must know! Be cautious sarah! But perhaps you're still jsut as curious as before and will sneak around the next corner to cure my OWN curiousity! Torture I say!
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and bittersweet! Yes I would like to see more of this! It is a very interesting outcome to the Tale. I always did feel the Goblin King had more in mind than just test her.