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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've gotten me teary-eyed with this one... So wonderfully bittersweet, and I love how Bumblebee heard the story and completely understands why Optimus did what he did. *sniffle* Amazing!
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*searches for a hanky* That was wonderful. I had to stop at one point cause I couldn't see the screen anymore. Great job!!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!!!!
I cried! That was so sad. I'd want to kill myself if I was in Optimus' position when watching the seven Sector dudes taking Bee!! Awwwwww!!!!!
-sniffs- -crying-
I cried! That was so sad. I'd want to kill myself if I was in Optimus' position when watching the seven Sector dudes taking Bee!! Awwwwww!!!!!
-sniffs- -crying-
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really, REALLY touching. Very sad, too, though. . .
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwe! that was so cute.
=)
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. That's a good way of a robot being pregnant and going into labour. No stupid womb or anything like that. If you don't mind, I'm going to copy your method - but not your story, honest!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done i moved it made me cry please write some more it would be nice to see how everyone see's bumblebee the son of Optimus prime. keep it up it's cool.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's so beautiful.... and so sad. Wonderful! I hate all mpreg stories, so I wasn't going to read this one. Then I saw it was by you so I knew I had to at least give it a chance (you are FANTASTIC) and it was amazing. It made scence, it was moving and felt so... real. I hope you never stop writing.
it wasn't adult in the slightest but I don't care.
it wasn't adult in the slightest but I don't care.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mpreg usually gives me the heebies, but I tossed it aside for this. They're alien creatures, and my personal feeling on gender means nothing in comparison. I'm glad I did. I got a little misty eyed, back there. Good read.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what a nice story, I hope to see more.