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by WTF

schedule April 11, 2026 at 12:00 AM

Well, the idea is not bad but I have to say, your spelling is atrocious and could be easily made better by a simple spellcheck in the program you write. Also the ages: If we go by your ages then Anakin was a Father at sixteen and I am not sure about that (though it'd be interesting).Canonically the ages are as following: By the time of RotJ Anakin is a mere 45 with Luke and Leia being 23 while Padmé would have been 50. Even if you want use different dates of Birth, I think Padmé was still queen during that time when Anakin was sixteen and if you use the Dreams then the Clone Wars still happened. I know, that plot and logic are not really that important if you want to write pure smut and yes, I agree with that. Still, if you give a backstory, especially with ages and events then even if it's PWP it needs to make some sort of sense (or at least that's my opinion).


Nevertheless, it is a beginning that has a lot of potential and considering this story is named the Jedi Order, there are many persons that could easily make an appearance as the Order has some very hot members (Aalya Secura, Shaak Ti, Siri Tachi and if you add the The Clone Wars then you can add Ahsoka Tano which would be interesting as she would be agewise pretty much exactly between Anakin and the Twins with the ages you gave, including some Master/Padawans duos: Depa Bilaba and Caleb Dume(Kanan Jarrus) hot MILF with her son, Luminara Unduli and Bariss Offee (Mother-(adoptive)daughter relationship ). So yes, the possibilities are there and can be either be explored or you concentrate exclusively on the Skywalker clan and their sexual adventures with each other, your choice.

Just please try to better the spelling. 


Good spelling and grammar make a story readable. If you have to decipher every second word, then there is no flow and you cannot enjoy it, no matter what kind of story.

person miow
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice plz carry on though :) more s3x :D
person mike226
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this great story.
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You simply have to continue this!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has a lot of potential, hope you willcontinue this story line
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea for the story! I've thought up similar (non-sexual) alternate-universes where Anakin never fell.
person kaleb22
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome! cant wait to see more of this. it'l be interesting to see the different groupings you choose.

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