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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you upload new chapter!
I think it would be better if you add it on fanfiction.net it's a better page.
I hope there would be more Maul!
I think it would be better if you add it on fanfiction.net it's a better page.
I hope there would be more Maul!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's a great story!
The beginning of it was hard to star and bit odd.
But second chapter where Xanatos is discripting orgins of his relationship with Obi-Wan is really good. Next chapter are very interesting as well! I'm really suprise that your story don't have lots reviews! Maybe you shoud put it in normal fanfiction.net and more readers will be have opportunity to read it? Anyway there is not that many mature moments.
The 6 chapter is extremely interesting! Especialy I like fragments with Maul:D
Well, but I hope Obi-Wan will be loyalty to Xanatos but Maul who is wanting Obi-Wan is interesting idea:D
I hope you will upload next chapter soon!
The beginning of it was hard to star and bit odd.
But second chapter where Xanatos is discripting orgins of his relationship with Obi-Wan is really good. Next chapter are very interesting as well! I'm really suprise that your story don't have lots reviews! Maybe you shoud put it in normal fanfiction.net and more readers will be have opportunity to read it? Anyway there is not that many mature moments.
The 6 chapter is extremely interesting! Especialy I like fragments with Maul:D
Well, but I hope Obi-Wan will be loyalty to Xanatos but Maul who is wanting Obi-Wan is interesting idea:D
I hope you will upload next chapter soon!