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Oh, I can't tell you how hard it is for me to restrain myself from calling you a very bad word at this moment. But that's just a testament to how good a writer you are, that I'm actually angry at you for doing this to Isis. I mean, really, is there no end to Kai's evil? I can't help but hope that Ali hunts her down and guts her like a pig. Or that Isis will do that, if she survives. Please please please pleease let her survive. She's awesome. And she hasn't been able to punch Ali'shir for his ignorance yet. She should at least be allowed that.

Anyway, I wait with bated breath for the next chapter. And do please try to make it quick, or I'm likely to cry.

Happy writing!

I read this from start till now and all I can say is wow! I hope Isis is okay and Yasin pulling that alarm I am greatful to him but so hate Kai!

OMG I love this story!!! Please hurry up and update!!!

Awesome Chappies Keenstuff. Have I told you how much I hate Kai? I hope her new 'pet' turns on her, bites her head off or sumthin'. I'm glad Yash'in at least had the decency to press the alarm before escaping. Can't wait for more.

NOOO
DON'T KILL ISIS! ALI AND ISIS NEED TO HAVE LITTLE MINNY ALI'S AND ISIS'S RUNNING AROUND D:
This got me choked up! I can't believe how much I love this story! its amazing, beautiful and breathtaking!
Honestly, This is the best story I have read in a while. {and in no order, along with two other stories I love reading, but its one of the top three ^_^}
AND BUDDY IS FREE! oh nos! this is bad news :0 I almost wish the little thing would kill Kai already. Really.
stupid evil whore D<

This chapter always makes me tear up. The picture is painted so well, you just can't help but feel despair at the whole situation. Now, though, I'm wondering if you are gonna change the ending? I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Oh, I did find one small mistake. I had to read it twice and I'm not sure if I got is right...
"She took the blade in her hand and raised his head, aiming to slit her throat from ear to ear when something grabbed at the back of her head." It's a room full of females and you have "his" head being lifted. I am assuming that Kai is lifting Gi's head. Right? Other than that, it was perfect.

And of course, I do so hate Kai. It would please me immensely if you would blow up her ship or something. Maybe have that 'pet' she took from Isis rip her limb from limb. That would only be fitting. Ok, I think I'm done rambling now. Can't wait for the next one!

Noooooo she can't die...

Oh no! You got tears in my eyes. Isis can't be dead! Please? Please?

Omfg, abbbouuuttt time. Good lord. And ..oh dear well I'm glad something good came from that confession.. except it did end rather.. sadly.. Jeez.. wow.. ;-; I can't wait to see what happens next!
Please update soon.

I hate to hear this is going to end soon !!! You do such a wonderful job.. I hope your goind to do more of Predator.. I would love to see a female predator fall in love with a human male.. Thanks for sharing... Your doing an awesome job!!