rate_review Reviews

So hot. I love this fic!

WOOOOT!
at last! some ACTION :D
Your stories are beautiful, I need to review them more often so you can know how much I love this story haha.
Its amazing. I love Ali and Isis :3

..Nice.. very very nice.. Too bad Ali'shir couldn't kill him though.. that would have been Aaammazzinnggg.. Of course, then there would be no real problem in the story.. except for Kaian.. I was ready for Isis to skewer her too.. Of course, that was put to a stop too.. Damn XD Lol anyways, I loved the chapter, can't wait till you update again! :3

Well, that was very good. I did notice quite a few changes from the original in this chapter. Especially the new title of 'Enforcer' (paying homage to Musey?) But, either way, I very much enjoyed the action. And yes, the title change is for the better, I think. And I'm hoping (but I won't get my hopes up too high) that when the story ends this time, I won't be left wanting more... Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next one! XD

I just love the sexual build up and its driving me crazy.... I also love how you have others interested in her.. Its just an amazing story.. You have a great talent of us wanting more and more... I want more!!!! Thanks again for sharing...

Oh they are SO fucked!!
X.x I knew as soon as I read the chapter name that something like this would happen.. Although I am so glad that it is just hunting instead of the Joi'en deal X.x That still makes me jittery XD lol anyways, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Ah, Keen. If there is a fault with this fanfic it lies in your ability to make me care about the characters so damn much. I love the interaction between Ali and Isis; it's sweet, it's realistic, and it's priceless. I always say Thug's characters come to life through action; yours come alive in conversation.
And sex.
We can't forget sex.
In my book, ma'am, you rank equal with Solain Rhyo in this fandom. Your shit is THAT bananas. And I'm not saying that just because I rape you repeatedly and make you ashamed of existing.
I love you, Keen Who's Mean to Tambourine.
Much Love,
Tammaramalambadamn

Ah, another great revising. I just love the way that they have started to get along. Even though, it's really even close to how they should be getting along. Can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work! =D

Busted! I really hate cliff-hangers so can't you please update ASAP? Anyway, great chapter, I'm looking forward for the next one to roll

About chapter 11......AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, guess there goes another perfectly good keyboard......
Will be reading chapters 12 and 13 tommorrow...PLEASE LET THERE BE RELIEF!!!!!!