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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
URST!! Gotta love it. And if I'm not mistaken, this is where the fic starts to get really heated. Great revisions. Love it and want more of it!!!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH HA!
Take that Kai!
^^ Started to read your story, and then could /not/ stop. It is very compelling! I looovvee Isis! She's great.. Ali'shir.. is more wishy washy. >> Back and forth with Isis and Kai, but he's still a great character :3 That last chapter was just a icing on top of the Ali'shir cake. Woonnddeerrrfffuulll. :3
Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Take that Kai!
^^ Started to read your story, and then could /not/ stop. It is very compelling! I looovvee Isis! She's great.. Ali'shir.. is more wishy washy. >> Back and forth with Isis and Kai, but he's still a great character :3 That last chapter was just a icing on top of the Ali'shir cake. Woonnddeerrrfffuulll. :3
Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I was bursting to know what was behind that mask, and now I think he should trow it in the garbage, he seem to look good after all XD
Please Update soon, I can't get enough of this fic.
Please Update soon, I can't get enough of this fic.
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can i just say I LOVE this story and I look daily to see when you've updated? Yeah, I'm a bit of a geek, but this is really one of the best Predator fanfics I've read in forever. Excellent work, awesome character development: I can't wait to see what comes up next. Keep up the wonderful work.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O wow... -purrs and fans self- Poor Isis has herself in a tight spot -chuckles- And Ali is no better.. of course we all know what he want -wink wink nudge nudge- Darlink this is a wonderful fic.. you've got me on the edge of my seat waitin for more...
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting even hotter and better. The deed hasn't even been done and I have melted into a puddle on the floor already. Can't wait for more.
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'So much fun!' LOL Poor Isis... Ali will tear Joi'ens head off if he learns about their little encounter! You're evil! But definitly a hot chapter! You manage to hold the suspense for such a long time that I really burst to know what will happen next! Please update ASAP
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way he went in to hhhum, 'releave his own tension' by thinking of Kai, but ended up thinking of Isis instead. LOL
Now, he wasn't a pussy tease this time. He was his own prick tease.
Love it Keen. Keep going
Now, he wasn't a pussy tease this time. He was his own prick tease.
Love it Keen. Keep going
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story, though I didn't read it before it was rewritten.
I can't help but get angry when I read a chapter and discovers that there aren't any more. I hope you can bear with me, since I really love your story.
Anyway, I'm bookmarking this, so I can check all the time.
Keep up your wonderful work!
I can't help but get angry when I read a chapter and discovers that there aren't any more. I hope you can bear with me, since I really love your story.
Anyway, I'm bookmarking this, so I can check all the time.
Keep up your wonderful work!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well...that was all new. I think...prolly not, but at this point I can't remember anymore. Great to see an update and I can't wait to see the next one! =D