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Good one Keen. Loved the first one, and am loving this one too. Can't wait to see where you will take it.

Each chapter is visually even more tangible and polished than before. Looking forward to more. Will there be alternate endings or a sequel?

I was just kidding. I really don't care when you post new chapters. I completely understand that RL comes first. And that sometimes you just don't want to deal with an ongoing project. I have many of those. But, none the less, I do enjoy the story. I am however, wondering if perhaps those that have not read the story the first time around, might be a little lost...or maybe I'm just screwed up thinking that there was more back story before...OH and one thing I did notice is that the flash back wasn't offset by anything. I almost didn't realize that it was what happened in the past. But again, that is just me. Can't wait to see the rest of it! =D

Nice. I have not read the first story but will look for it tomorrow. Please e-mail me when you update. Please? talene02002@yahoo.com

Hi Cam. I love this story. Isis is so strong and brave, I hope things will become better for her. More chapters? Soon I hope.

Wow! I love where your taking this version, too. More soon please.

I like this your rewrite

Cool story, I want to read more please keep updating. Cheers blue.

Keen this is wonderful, I can't wait until there is more for me to read. Please hurry.

Ar'Shiya

Alright Cam...I fully expect to see regular, quick updates on this, since you are just editing it. And I'm glad to see you are redoing it. All of the tension and suspense are still there. And the reader is left with a deep sense of foreboding... =D