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for Your Eyes Can Be So Cruel

by NeverEmbers

person Reih
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NeverEmbeeeeeeers!
Finiiiiiiish!! <3
I had to review again. ^^;;
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have recently heard that Reviews are becoming a problem namely with never ever ever being done... Well in that case I am writing reviews for all the stories that I read read to tell you how much I apprecheate and do LOVE your writing you are actually on a book marked list that I check every day and get VERY excited when I see new postings... with that said I must slip to the obligatory I WANT NEW CHAPTERS DAMN YOUS!!!!
person chick-yasha
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the twist you put on the Labyrinth. I have read many fanfic of the Labyrinth and I have to say thing one is nothing like the others I have read. It is a very refreach in look and I am very please to say that I can't wait for the next chapter. It is real for my to comment on fanfics because there are only three shows I like made into them.
You have do a great job, please keep up the good work.
From you new fan,
chick-yasha
person Saiou-chan
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Please update again, this is such a cool story, good Labyrinth fics are hard to find, and I'm hook! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
person Saiou-chan
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
P.S. If you have a mailing list, can I be added? My email is slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com
person Reih
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This is one of the best Labyrinth fanfics that I've ever read and most certainly the best one that I've read lately. It's so hard to find a fic that has a good plot, well thought-out characters (Diddle!!), and an author who can actually write. I love the way you made Jareth throw Sarah into situations (just like he really would have done) but then you didn't linger for too long on one thing. You kept the story moving and kept us (the readers) excited and waiting for the next chapter. I was so sad to see that I had reached the last chapter! I hope you update this fanfic! It's going in my favorites!
*A fan for life*
Reih~
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you did an awesome job... i like the originality in your story and your trueness to character... well done
person Cheeky_Wench
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heya Hun

I see you still havnt updated **CRIES** Please Please PLEase PLEASE UPDATE SOON,
person amaria
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi!I loved this story but since you havent updated for ages I'm not going to give up but I'm only going to check every other week now,lol!Please update!!
person dweek
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story so far and I have to say I love it. As a person who has been watching the Labyrinth since she was very young, and understood more and more of it as she got old, I have to say I think you have caught these characters very well. The layers with the brother and the other fey of the Underground are interesting and very believable to the world.

On another note, just to tell someone I can see is a great fan of the movie, I wasn't sure if you knew or not but they have started to write a manga about what happens after the movie. It takes place several years later and involves mostly Toby. Though I think I am liking your version better. Please keep writing this story!