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April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HEHE Loving it so far. What are Feral's Plan surely she has some evil motive for helping Sarah.
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March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack, how misunderstandings can be blown out of proportion....I love your story and I definitely hope you are able to update soon! =)
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heya i was wondering when you are going to update next? i love this story and i only found it today. hehehe
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is actually a good story. I like stories that aren't all fluff and romance. Things like this... yeah. Hope to see the next chapter soon
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG i hope you continue. i am loving this story. as for those bitching about the BDSM um hello its in as one of your warnings kinda like if you don't like that kinda stuff DUH don't read the story you moron. Keep up the story omg i need more PLEASE
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
After reading other people's reviews and their responses to what they assumed I had said, I feel that I must explain once more - even though I assumed that you probably have such dom/sub relationship in your life, I wasn't trying to insult your probable sexual preferences. I was only saying that if you have such a relationship in your own life, then there is no hope that you will write anything different in your story.
I also feel that after my previous explanations it should have become clear that I wasn't aiming at dom/sub relationship as such in my review, but at the kind of abusive relationship where those things happen without consent from the abused person and where the one abusing them doesn't really care about the other and doesn't think about how the other feels and if she/he is not hurt too much in the process. It seemed to me that that's the way how Jareth was going to treat Sarah and when I wrote the review I was too upset about that to stop and really think what I was saying and how I was saying it. So it came out the wrong way.
I also apologize for using the dom/sub label constantly instead of the right abbreviation. I admit that I don't really know what that abbreviation stands for, and probably that's why I never remember the right sequence of letters without looking it up.
I also feel that after my previous explanations it should have become clear that I wasn't aiming at dom/sub relationship as such in my review, but at the kind of abusive relationship where those things happen without consent from the abused person and where the one abusing them doesn't really care about the other and doesn't think about how the other feels and if she/he is not hurt too much in the process. It seemed to me that that's the way how Jareth was going to treat Sarah and when I wrote the review I was too upset about that to stop and really think what I was saying and how I was saying it. So it came out the wrong way.
I also apologize for using the dom/sub label constantly instead of the right abbreviation. I admit that I don't really know what that abbreviation stands for, and probably that's why I never remember the right sequence of letters without looking it up.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm sorry I havent reviewed in a while I'v been really buzy.
I completly agree with you, I feel personally that a very stong and binding love can be easily found through BDSM so long as your open to the new experiences(or old ;-) )it brings with it.
Having been in such relationships myself, which is the reason I read this type of story,(plus Jareth!)and also taking the time to review, I have come to notice that a lot of people find it fun to flame a good writter for a story which as far as the reviewer is concerned is sick and disturbing.
Well I only have one real thing to say to these people and that is that I have read some truly disgusting things on this site, and I have never even considered leaving a flame, if I found the story to not be to my own taste then I would simply stop reading the story and would carry on looking for another one. I would never presume to insult a persons sexual preferance, as far as I'm concerened as long as it's two consenting adults anything goes,(whatever floats your boat as they say,lol.)and at the end of the day it's just a story, not real life, if you want to get really technical go read the real life section and leave good writters alone.
NeverEmbers I hope that that makes you feel a little better.
Amaria xx
I completly agree with you, I feel personally that a very stong and binding love can be easily found through BDSM so long as your open to the new experiences(or old ;-) )it brings with it.
Having been in such relationships myself, which is the reason I read this type of story,(plus Jareth!)and also taking the time to review, I have come to notice that a lot of people find it fun to flame a good writter for a story which as far as the reviewer is concerned is sick and disturbing.
Well I only have one real thing to say to these people and that is that I have read some truly disgusting things on this site, and I have never even considered leaving a flame, if I found the story to not be to my own taste then I would simply stop reading the story and would carry on looking for another one. I would never presume to insult a persons sexual preferance, as far as I'm concerened as long as it's two consenting adults anything goes,(whatever floats your boat as they say,lol.)and at the end of the day it's just a story, not real life, if you want to get really technical go read the real life section and leave good writters alone.
NeverEmbers I hope that that makes you feel a little better.
Amaria xx
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :) Please add more.
And ignore people who don't like BDSM. Fantasies are fantasies for a reason, and the actual practice of BDSM revolves around the SSC concept - Safe, Sane, and Consensual.
I love being beaten ;-)
And ignore people who don't like BDSM. Fantasies are fantasies for a reason, and the actual practice of BDSM revolves around the SSC concept - Safe, Sane, and Consensual.
I love being beaten ;-)
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, mean Jareth! I'm personally not a fan of guys doing things like than and getting away with it, so I hope Sarah makes it hard for him! I do really like your story so far though, and I can't wait to read more :)