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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing idea you got going on here!!! I'm not too sure if I like the love triangle going on, but hey what ever adds more tension btween our beloved Jarth and Sarah right? :P Umm I was just wondering, maybe you said it before in the story and I happend to miss it... How older is Sarah suppose to be?
Well, keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for your posts. ><
Well, keep up the good work! I'll be waiting for your posts. ><
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Please let me know when you update. Ok? Thanks!! talene02002@yahoo.com
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! He's so mean, I love it! Whats he gonna do to make her cry I wonder? >;-)
Can't wait for next chapter, I hate cliffies,lol.
Amaria x
Can't wait for next chapter, I hate cliffies,lol.
Amaria x
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is cool....more more more please
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really intrigued by this story, but where is chapter 4? There's just the disclaimer and your thanks to your beta. It's not supposed to be like that, is it?
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha all these years and he still hasnt learnt Hoggles name.lol.Or has it not been years down there?
Anyway I'm glad that your not going to turn him into some prince charming because thats not who he is, but yes I do agree that people change with age.
I hope you carry on, because I'm really enjoy this fic and your style of writting.
Amaria x
Anyway I'm glad that your not going to turn him into some prince charming because thats not who he is, but yes I do agree that people change with age.
I hope you carry on, because I'm really enjoy this fic and your style of writting.
Amaria x
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great start. Well written and intriguing.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story cant wait to hear more it :)
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
>w< this is my favorite movie, and i'm loving your fic so far! its so good and you make it seem like it was part of the movie, like an extended scenes
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Jareth seems happy! I hope shes ok though, I hate it when writters make her so weak in front of him.
Please update soon.
Amaria x
Please update soon.
Amaria x