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by unknownsoldier

person rosaseravo
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the naughty chapter! Elizabeth is a legend now, more than Anne Bonney ever was! :) Interesting that Elizabeth is talking more like a sailor now. Makes sense that she would, after months at sea.

By the way, one little helper: it's "rogue". "Rouge" is pink makeup you put on your cheeks. ("Everybody" does this typo including me!!) Come to think of it that would be a fun thing to say to Jack..."You lovable hot compact of pink cheek powder!" lol