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for Gin and Pie

by ForestRain

person tash1021
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww how sad
person zoo
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely yet melancholy! I enjoyed this. Although your repeated grammar mistakes (specifically missing commas) made this needlessly difficult to read, what was written was not bad.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great!! Very hot!! I loved the ending though, his having sex with Mrs. Lovett being the reason he was so detached, and vacant when they had the picnic!! ^.^ XXOO
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually no, I'm English. Glad you all like it. :)
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
American? I can tell; find a britpic & grammar beta & this story can be ace!
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its good..i love it =), cant wait to read more
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello i just want to let you know that there is a sweeney todd section on here now
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like sweeney todd fics can you put in a request to the mods to make a sweeney todd section so your story and others can be on the site in it own section.
person KStewart
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done and well written for a first fic. Look forward to more.