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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. I can't wait for the sequel to come out. I hope it's soon. Thank you so much for making a wonderful story.
P.S. You're an amazing artist as well. :)
P.S. You're an amazing artist as well. :)
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Get a beta or a proper spellchecker. It's spelled "mammary glands", not "mamory glands". Your female character is also rather Mary Sueish; oh so perfect. Better luck next time.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was bored basically, thats when I decided to look into the movie section. I came across alot of movie fics that i would never read, one of them being predator, I had only ever watched a smidgen of one of the movies while flipping threw channels one day. This fic really opened my eyes, I didnt think I would like it at all when i first started reading it, but as soon as I read the first paragraph I got addicted to it. Its funny, interesting, romantic and sexy, and you really get attached to all of the characters. ^^ My favorite of the three aliens is Tzukra, favorite chapter would have to be the feel good experiment, I was depressed when I realized that her and Tzukra weren't going to be together instead, but I adapted to the idea of K'tch. Anyways, this is an awesome story and I love it. I am assuming there is a second part coming out or already out so ima go and see about that on your character profile. If there isnt a second part out I wish you all of the best of luck in the world in writing it <33333333 I LOVE Your STORIES SO MUCH! *Hugs* Thank you for writing it!
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this was 1 of the best stories I've ever read! Awesome. Im soooo glad there's gonna b a sequel. It was such a beautifull, funny, action-packed, cute story! Keep up the great work! Ur gifted!
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October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i love this story, one of the best i've read! keep it up!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good... definitely better than expected. What was expected was early, unrealistic sex that just seemed forced.
This was well-written, with nice attitude... and I liked your art, as well. Nice work!
This was well-written, with nice attitude... and I liked your art, as well. Nice work!
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dear, God you are amazing. This was a great story and I am VERY happy i found a good predator story in a sea of Mary sue stories. :3 I'll be looking forward to the sequel, just please don't make us wait forever. O_O
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOO!-WOOOOOOOO!!!Yeah baby!Man I love this story!!!That Sharron is cute but what a pain in the ass, hell even I feel like "B"-slapping her sometimes!
Well, dying to see how this joy-ride is going to end up!YEEEEE-HAAAAAWWW!!!!
Well, dying to see how this joy-ride is going to end up!YEEEEE-HAAAAAWWW!!!!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Yayz!
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! I started to worry because there were no new updates until I learned from Predaphile that you weren't well. I hope you are alright and i'm looking forward to the sequel XD (so happy I could piss! o_O)
BTW: This was a awesome chap. A good end and also a great point to start with the Sequel. I'm dying to learn were this relationship will take sharon and K'tch. Keep up the good work and update ASAP.
BTW: This was a awesome chap. A good end and also a great point to start with the Sequel. I'm dying to learn were this relationship will take sharon and K'tch. Keep up the good work and update ASAP.