rate_review Reviews

Loved this story. I can't wait for the sequel to come out. I hope it's soon. Thank you so much for making a wonderful story.
P.S. You're an amazing artist as well. :)

Get a beta or a proper spellchecker. It's spelled "mammary glands", not "mamory glands". Your female character is also rather Mary Sueish; oh so perfect. Better luck next time.

I was bored basically, thats when I decided to look into the movie section. I came across alot of movie fics that i would never read, one of them being predator, I had only ever watched a smidgen of one of the movies while flipping threw channels one day. This fic really opened my eyes, I didnt think I would like it at all when i first started reading it, but as soon as I read the first paragraph I got addicted to it. Its funny, interesting, romantic and sexy, and you really get attached to all of the characters. ^^ My favorite of the three aliens is Tzukra, favorite chapter would have to be the feel good experiment, I was depressed when I realized that her and Tzukra weren't going to be together instead, but I adapted to the idea of K'tch. Anyways, this is an awesome story and I love it. I am assuming there is a second part coming out or already out so ima go and see about that on your character profile. If there isnt a second part out I wish you all of the best of luck in the world in writing it <33333333 I LOVE Your STORIES SO MUCH! *Hugs* Thank you for writing it!

Omg, this was 1 of the best stories I've ever read! Awesome. Im soooo glad there's gonna b a sequel. It was such a beautifull, funny, action-packed, cute story! Keep up the great work! Ur gifted!

OMG, i love this story, one of the best i've read! keep it up!

This is pretty good... definitely better than expected. What was expected was early, unrealistic sex that just seemed forced.
This was well-written, with nice attitude... and I liked your art, as well. Nice work!

dear, God you are amazing. This was a great story and I am VERY happy i found a good predator story in a sea of Mary sue stories. :3 I'll be looking forward to the sequel, just please don't make us wait forever. O_O

WOOOO!-WOOOOOOOO!!!Yeah baby!Man I love this story!!!That Sharron is cute but what a pain in the ass, hell even I feel like "B"-slapping her sometimes!
Well, dying to see how this joy-ride is going to end up!YEEEEE-HAAAAAWWW!!!!

You updated! Yayz!

Welcome back! I started to worry because there were no new updates until I learned from Predaphile that you weren't well. I hope you are alright and i'm looking forward to the sequel XD (so happy I could piss! o_O)
BTW: This was a awesome chap. A good end and also a great point to start with the Sequel. I'm dying to learn were this relationship will take sharon and K'tch. Keep up the good work and update ASAP.