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Wow, that is a really well written story. I can't wait till you update it again. Hopefully it's soon :D

I hope you haven't abandoned this story. Please update soon,
It's far too good to be unfinished.

I am beyond impressed by your story. I am brand new to trying my hand at a Tranformers fanfic (not here but @ fanfiction.net) and I by chance was curious as to what was out there in comparison to the "Same ole crap". I was MOST fortunate to come across your story and I anxiously await an update!

Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant!

F.L.

Oh I love this! It's so original and yet still holding with all the ambiance and characterization of the cannon setting. I hope you're still writing on it, as I eagerly await more. :-)

Claire is a brilliantly flawed multidimensional character and Smokescreen is one yummy alien car. :-)

I love it! -giggles- although I feel sorry for Claire... being stuck with an Ex-look-a-like that held the personalitly of the autobot she was falling for. -snickers- and what girl couldn't help falling for the mech that saved her life... I love the detal that you so lovinging put inot the story. And the President is one of them... sweet. Well the shit done hit the fan now. Waiting for the next chapter... Poor Smokescreen... All those naughty memories -wink-

Glad to see your back. Wow, this was a very nice chapter. Gonna be kinda rough on Smokescreen getting used to this new body, feelings, ect. Gonna be interesting to see how the others react to it. Chan't wait to see what happens next.

Wow way to leave on a cliffhanger! It seems almost cruel, though it was an excellent chapter.
I am extremely curious to see what is going to happen next. Smokescreen does not seem to like
humans as much as the other Autobots do. How is he going to like being one...
Good luck on your move, a lovely House Warming gift (to us) would be a nice, long, new chapter... ^_^

Ch.15. Mid-April?!!!!!! Well, that's totally unacceptable!!!! (Grin, kidding). Wow, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat, loved it. Now I'm wondering, will Smokescreen get his body back? How will the other autobots react when they find out? Well, now that I think about it mid-April isn't really that far away. LOL. Good luck with your move.

Oh, man, this is looking good? Bad? (shrug) The president seems to have been taken over, I'd love to find out how they managed that. Claire's ex is toast, which we seen earlier. Now we have this huge fight on her street. I think Smokescreen's gonna be a little ticked if they get out of this, he warned her about what might happen and it did. Oh, to back up a little to where Claire was wondering if Smokescreen didn't enjoy arguing with her? I kinda think she enjoy's it too. LOL. Anyways as always I can't wait to see more. (Would a cookie bribe speed things along? (Grin)

Awwwww, Smokescreen an Claire are getting along. I really like the feel fo this chapter, keep up the great work on it.