rate_review Reviews

Woo MIT!
Great chapter, I loved how Smokescreen and Claire had that soft moment in the end.
Makes me wish I had a large robot friend.

Personally, I'm enjoying the pace the story's going. I'm with Marigold about Bumble Bee/ Smokescreen.:). This was a very nice chapter, now if Smokescreen'd done the right thing with the soda machine instead of showing off it would've been a nice jesture on his part, but Claire pouring the soda on him didn't help matters either. But I'm just wondering if Smokescreen isn't masking his feelings with his attitude instead? Could be wrong, but that's what's starting to crop in in the back of my mind about these two. Antways can't wait to see what happens next.

Cheers to Bee! It seem both Smokescreen and Bee seem to have this rivalry going on, interesting.
I absolutely love how they get under each other's "hoods" har har.... *Ahem*

The soda scene was great, he acted like the 'cool guy' who chills by the vending machine all day, and
helps you out by banging the side to help you get your snack… if you meet his fancy.
Its nice to see that Smokescreen has a gentler side and does slightly care for Claire. However, I am looking
forward to seeing how their relationship is going to plays out. Especially if he is the type of bot who
enjoys a fresh helping of revenge.
However, I do pity them for having to stay in that gross hotel room. Just thinking what may be living on
the mattress and carpet gave me the jitters.
In conclusion, I agree with Timberwolf, you have me hooked.

To answer your question (A.N. chapter 12.) I personally love extremely, long chapters.
On the other hand, more updates are nice. In the end, it does not matter to
me either way.
I will be happy with just the update (hee hee).

I really enjoyed how this cahpter went. I'm surprised . . well, I don't know if surprised is the right word or not, by Smokescreen at the end here, it seem as if he's trying to be nice. It's gonna be interesting to see how things pan out. As you can see, I'm pretty much hooked on your story here, keep up the great work.

First, I gotta agree with Marigold, it really makes my day to see a new chapter to this story and as Marigold says, now all the parts are starting to come together nicely. I remembered watching Transformers growing up and when I heard about the movie I thought for sure they'd screw it up, instead I freaking love it and can't wait for the second movie to come out. As far as personalities of Smokescreen and Claire you could ask for a better match up. LOL. Also funny was BumbleBee putting Smokescreen in his place(Grin), that'll teach the old grouch LOL. Again, keep up the good work.

I'd rather read the TV Guide. Kidding, kidding. I'm sorry to hear your loosing steam on this, at least to me this seem to be going great. Long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading, keep up the good work.

First, I love coming online and checking this story and seeing that it is updated ^_^ it really makes my day.
Second, Smokescreen has such a great personality. He and Claire have wonderful chemistry.
I love how your story is getting to the stage were all plots are starting to unravel.
I like Transformers (mostly the movie) but unfortunately, I do not know much about them (sorry).
However, you explain everything so nicely in the story that I can understand no problem.
Especially in, the *actual* story and your ending notes.
This is turning out to be such a fantastic story. I hope you don't deiced to give up on it.
Keep chuggin' on.

Love this story, it's gonna be interesting to see where this goes with Claire and Smokescreen. LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this! When I checked to see if you updated and saw all the new chapters, I was ecstatic.
Your doing a great job and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great writing.