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I really like this, so I'm just hoping that you update soon. Bumblebee is so lonely...

Hey, I'll take smut. It's Will/'Hide smut, which is good, and it's Cover Me smut, which is better. It would be better still if the intervening month wasn't present, of course, but I just let my theoretically-weekly fic sit for either two or three weeks with no action, so glass houses and stones and... yeah.

And you remembered lube and prep this time! Very enjoyable, and very glad to see you back in action! (heads back to ch65 to continue re-reading, again)

~ Jade (yes, the same Jade from ff. I am very willing to pad your review numbers, XD)

another hot chapter, those two just scream naughtiness when they're together though, don't they? lol hope your month stays absolutely wonderful, and ignore the people around you in the comp lab, they shouldn't be reading over your shoulder anyway, if they do...well they deserve the shock they get...and who knows, you might make some more fans ;) and so excited about the movies (saw the full list on your ff site). keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!

First have to say OMG WOW AMAZING! I started reading this three nights ago now, just finished and like all good addictions, i need my next fix...soon! PLEASE?! You are an amazing writer, first just juggling the sheer amount of characters and keeping them all in order and unique is an amazing feat in and of itself. The plot is amazing, i honestly cannot believe i've just got finished reading 175 chapters and i'm still begging for more and as an avid reader, that's saying something. You've given your story such an amazing sense of humor even in the middle of action and romance scenes, which you've noted that you weren't sure about your results on, well from my standpoint, they were amazingly done also. The action scenes, or drama (the ice rescue), you've given the right amount of adrenaline inducing action without taking it into the over the top realm. And even though you said you weren't comfy with the slash scenes, they came out really well, you can really feel the emotion the partners have for each other (and I have to admit, the Will/'Hide scene was pretty hot). You've obviously put a -lot- of work and thought into the world you've created down to the little details that seem small in one chapter only to have a large impact chapters down the road, not to mention the completely imagined parts like Primus' world and making the new sparklings. As for all the comments you mentioned criticizing your work, remember to take it with a grain of salt. Considering you've -frequently- mentioned computer problems and lack of betas, not to mention actual real life drama, a few spelling and grammar issues are nothing in the grand scheme of things. The fact that you were churning out a chapter a day for a while is completely mind boggling considering they were actual full chapters and not just drabbles. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to see where this story goes. You've got yourself another devoted fan :)

so, WHEN are you gonna let in on the fact that WILL has a spark in him???? and WHEN are we gonna get another chance at seeing those two get their freak on??? and the fiasco between sam and 'cade and those two having their fun??

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!


BTW........i LOVE chapter 81!!!! *blushies* i was reading that with my kids around!! they looked at me like i had lost my mind!!!
oh well!

more please!



~_^

mizu

hey, I really like this story, are you going to continue it? also what happens with knight and what is up with thundercracker and skywarp will they join the auto bots also will sam and barricade get together and if so what about bumblebee. what happens with sector 13. please please continue with this story I have read it twice so far and am anxious for another chapter. also what will barricade and bumblebee talk about. thanks for a great story

Ok I seriously almost did not open this story. But then I thought why not. Now i'm 104 chapters in and I cannot put it down. You are an excellent writer and I love this piece. Please never stop. Seriously. Cookies and Kudos to all :)

Hi, I really really like this fic. It has taken me three days to read it and it was worth it. But ARG! it stopped on a cliffhanger. could you please e-mail me when the next chapter is posted because I really want to know what happens next. Also what are you going to do with Bumblebee? The way i the story seems to be going your not going to have a bumblebee/sam/barricade fic, though that would be nice, so what is going to happen to poor bumblebee. Bye.

make them have hot mecha sex? *grins*

OMG I've been reading this for 3 days straight and like the whole time I was hoping you would bring Jazz back AND YOU DID! You don't know how much I love you right now lol this fic is so damn friggin amazing, you're a awesome writer keep it up!