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by Huronoryu

schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Twins! :D *squee!*

I voted for your story!
person Christina
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about anybody being OOC in your story. There are so many different universes in Transformers it's not funny. My husband collects transformers, and there are at least 5 different alternate universes that I can think of. I love your story, and I really do laugh out loud while reading it.
person Storm
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So great. I love this story. I always check for updates. Ironhide had me laughing so hard with that 'REVENGE!' line. It was great. I can't wait to see what happens with Sam/Barricade/Bee and also how the gremlins take to Sam. Do they see him as a sort of mother or something or do they resent him. Can't wait to see that development. Keep up the excellent work.
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You gave a Sunny who's in LABOR a cattleprod. I'm not sure whether to laugh hysterically or cringe in fear.

And I totally saw the twin sparklings coming. After all, Primus based the new ability on how the humans reproduce - and twins run in families. Ironhide's line was perfect.
person racheldr
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
twins for the twins! i love you, i love this! thank you!!! Its understandable about real life, i wish you all the best and hope all turns out well for you.
person Skyure
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
REVENGE xDDDDD


Yes xD
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, the ending with Ironhide yelling REVENGE! was the best. I wonder how well he'll take it when he finds out that he and Will are expecting.
person DemonChyld
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Cackles evilly and rolls on the floor laughing her tush off!*
OMG That was great! You seriously made my day with this installment.

DemonChyld
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was just EVIL.
person midnighteyes
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!! I'm loving every minute of it!!!