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Okay, so, I've been reading your story since chapter 58, or there about but my life has been nuts and I keep forgetting to review. I have time now. Which means...I get to catch up on reviewing things.

Okay...*rolls up sleeves and tries to figure out how to say this without fan girling all over you*

I love this fic. Yes, it's long but damn it! Every thing connects! That's what matters! I have something to look forward to reading each week (seeing as I've been working on my own stuff and not posting, so no reviews to read) and to find out what is going to happen next.

You have made me COO at this fic. And that's saying something since I don't coo.

Like, ever.

I dislike the sound of cooing. So you are one of the few who have made me coo. That means I like those parts that are so damn cute I can feel a cavity starting. (it's of the good)

I have drooled. Hun, I like transformers fics but seriously? The smut that most use? Not my favorite thing. You...are my idol for the way you write the mech sex. And the human/mech sex. You have inspired me to try my own hands. *crosses fingers she doesn't piss of beta since beta also writes spark merging as sex*

Anyways, I have laughed and nearly cried with your fic. And...I've read it so far like 6 times.

Carpel tunnel, cracked fingers and a bad back (which forces me away from my computer) have stopped me from reviewing the last few times.

Back on subject, each time I find something new that I missed, or a favored part again or just something that sparks my interest in reading at all.

You are really a great writer and I'm glad you have decided to share your wonderful story with the rest of the world. I hope life treats you right and I hope that I can review more often now that things have calmed down a bit.

I know you said do not review this chapter, but i have to say something. I've been following your story for awhile now and It is your vision and no one elses.. I LOVE IT!!! This is how i see it. If you do not like the story, simpley do not read it. But i for one love this story and i love the way you are writting it and where it is going.. You never want to rush a story if you can help it. I want to personally thank you for sharing your vision with us. I look forward to your update and i do hope you get to feeling better.. From one writer to another.. Adam...

I know you said not to review, but I just wanted to say that people are... well lets say I don't have much faith in humanity. Your Fanfic is amazing. When I first started reading it, I read it three days straight after school till I caught up. I always wait eagerly for you to update cause this is just oh so amazing. I always hate it when other fanfics are too short, but this is just great. I absolutely love this! So let people say what they will, I just wanted you to know that there are people who appreciate your work and think it's absolutely amazing. Hope you're well! And Sorry about the jackasses.

Hey, where's my update? I've gotten spoiled!

Ok...... so many chapters. Finally an answer on who the two were, but easy enough to guess with the way they acted. Though you did state not to say or ask about the other two they are looking for; my only question is: are they in the TF's series? Or OC's?

“I am the supreme being of the universe!”

O_O..... *bursts out laughing* Sunstorm seems to think mighty highly of himself. GAH, I love him already. I think Perceptor just found himself a best friend in Skyfire. I loved the “You’re a scientist, aren’t you?" “How could you say that like it’s a bad thing?” exchange.

“I am the chosen of Primus himself!”

*hangs onto Misfire, lest she laugh herself into hitting the ground*

I can hardly wait for more!

*hands Misfire some more energon treats to keep him quiet and happy while munching on a turkey leg*

Happy Thanksgiving!!!

Heh, almost thought you were going to say Starscream was their brother! Going good, can't beleive you keep makign up good ideas with so many chapters!!!!!!!

What is up with all the seekers being a little.....eccentric? I must admit that I love them that way. I almost feel sorry for the artic group, but then I think it wouldn't be half as funny without the new mechs.

I GOT SKYFIRE RIGHT!!!!!!!!!! *does a happy dance* Oh, i just love Skyfire and Sunstorm! Those two are soooooo much fun! Question: A lot of the fics dealing with Sunstorm have him emiting a form of raditaion that is deadly to EVERYTHING. Is the mega glitch in his system your version of that?

Btw, can I have Sunstorm?