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*Digs herself out from ubder the pile of Life dumped on her head* I finally made it!!

Awwwww....Gravelgrinder and Spindle, so cute!!! He missed his little buddy! *giggles*

And who is this? Is it.... Swindle maybe? Or someone else? Hmmmm

*curls up with the long-suffering Misfire* Mmmmm, who needs down pillows when you have a cute Seeker!! ^_^

I love this story, look forward to the next chapter every week; i just hope sam doesn't let 'cade and 'bee off the hook easily, they deserve a bit of pain.

What's Rollerforce's idea?!!! Those poor gremlins. I want to see how Red and Mikaela suffer!!! And sadly, I understand Groundhog's complaint about being short *sob*

I like long fics! When I read a good story its twice as great when it's nice and long. Keep up the good work, you have me intrigued, I check up on your fic for updates all the time =).

i have love eacch and every chapter you have posted . I espacially like the completely random ones like this b/c it keeps the story grounded. lol i look forward to every new chapter, and can't wait for the next one. thanks for posting this for us to be able to read! xoxo

D: I LOVE the length of this fic! Heck, I don't care if it goes anywhere, as long as I get to read it... ^_^

:D Aww, how cute. They're going on a date?
^_^ The Terraformers causing trouble once again, eh? XD They seem to be the major form of entertainment over at the base right now.

*starts to laugh* Fugures Trent would flip out like that!

The length of this Fic is amazing, honestly hope it never ends.
It gives me something to read and then reread,
that takes me time and I enjoy it as much as the time before.
So don't worry about others sayin' anything about that.
As you said, you write it for yourself first! That's how it should be.

Anyway, Blue and Motor are so cute.
Made me laugh when Motor was talkin' with Crikey.
Figures someone would wanna spy on them and awesome scene with Trent -- he deserves the freak out.

Yet I'm a little on the
"Nooo, still a cliffhanger -- wanna know whose dropping in and now another one!"
side on what's happenin' up in Alaska, Haha.

Great job! :3
Can't wait for the next chapter.

I come back to the fic after catching up on my school work and i find my self at a cliff hanger. How evil of you BDQ

I agree with Catc: this is going to be...a challenge to edit. Right now, if it were actually printed and bound, it would be well over 2,200 pages long (I used a very high words-per-page number to do the calc--it's actually probably higher), and that's apparently only 2/3 of it? So....this is longer than _Gone with the Wind_ and _War and Peace_ put together. Obviously you're doing something right to get people reading such a massive text, but...some chapters are a bit flabby--not much happens. Or we have the SAME argument over and over again (how many times are Bee and Cade going to argue over Sam while not bothering to notice or consider Sam's actual feelings?) where nothing gets resolved. I'm glad to see that in the last two chapters it seems things are finally moving again: I hope this means you've got a handle on the action and we're going to see rising conflict and story tension, not just interpersonal, as we build to what I certainly hope is an exciting climax!