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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First, and foremost. This story completely rocks. I stumbled across it, started reading, and quickly got hooked. Please, please, -please- keep up the great work you've been doing. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how things turn out with everything. And I really, really hope something horrible happens to Knight. You've done a great job making him a shifty slimeball. My hat's off to you.
Love the way you have all the characters interact. Your explanation of them having a hidden program to make them adapt to the local population is a touch of genius. Again, keep it up.
Love the way you have all the characters interact. Your explanation of them having a hidden program to make them adapt to the local population is a touch of genius. Again, keep it up.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again, excellant chapter. Poor Ravage *snickers* I hope Megatron and Frenzy get to the bottom of the whole Sam, Barricade and Bumblebee issue. Keep up the good writing. Hope your case goes well.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your story... It makes my day everytime i see an update.. I love every minute of reading this... thank you again!!!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! If I counted right, Teletraan knows about Will's... condition. An no one noticed... Mwahahahaha... I got such a kick out of Optimus and his filing cabinets, which is almost kind of pathetic... Oh well, I'm just weird that way. Now I patiently await next chapter.
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your little twists and turns, they make this so much fun! Good luck with the court case, and keep up with your writing, its great. Also, please, oh please oh please, let Bee or 'Cade, or even better both get a good whack upside the head. I think they need it.
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Congratulations for the wonderful fic! I must say in all languages I can read, it is one of the best fics I has read in 5 years, I like a lot the plot line and characterization of peronages and your fic got me like a vice, every week I espect another chapter. It got me a lot time of laugh, most when the Autobots and Decepticons are together. Is too much fun read they arguing with another, as the misfortunes with Misfire who let me almost feel sorry for Starscream.
I must say when I looked at your fic I think "it's just another transformers' fic", I was in OptimusxMegatron phase...but well, I like the Decepticons more than Autobots then I became read and it's a shock! Your fic caught me fascinated, took me hole four days to read all chapters and I can't stop to feel anxious for another, hehe. Isn't only for the plus characters and couples or the plot line, but for your style of write what I think it's nice.
In this right time I'm crazy thinking what will occur in the next chapter and how the situation with Barricade, Bumblebee and Sam will resolve. Someone ever will be in wrong place and wrong time...Well, good luck, it's a wonderful fic!
Ps.: Sorry for the errors, English isn't my first language. And, you mind if I salve your fic for futures re-reads?
I must say when I looked at your fic I think "it's just another transformers' fic", I was in OptimusxMegatron phase...but well, I like the Decepticons more than Autobots then I became read and it's a shock! Your fic caught me fascinated, took me hole four days to read all chapters and I can't stop to feel anxious for another, hehe. Isn't only for the plus characters and couples or the plot line, but for your style of write what I think it's nice.
In this right time I'm crazy thinking what will occur in the next chapter and how the situation with Barricade, Bumblebee and Sam will resolve. Someone ever will be in wrong place and wrong time...Well, good luck, it's a wonderful fic!
Ps.: Sorry for the errors, English isn't my first language. And, you mind if I salve your fic for futures re-reads?
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Your writing and characters are amazing. I love the way you are doing Megatron and Barricade. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Captain Cade? XD Wow, wonder by how megs feels about that
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gleeful grinning grin-y grin face*!!!!!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FYI: Epps is in the Air Force. He's not a Ranger. Rangers are Army only.
Yeah, us military types actually care about this stuff. And it's such a good story, I'd hate a teeny detail like this to torpedo someone's enjoyment.
Yeah, us military types actually care about this stuff. And it's such a good story, I'd hate a teeny detail like this to torpedo someone's enjoyment.