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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I am up to chapter 32, the only reason that number is so low is because I have learned that I can only read this when I am completely 100% alone. Apparently me laughing = unsettling to the people around me. My laugh "doesn't sound healthy" I think the word maniacal has come up. So then I had to hide my laughter. Well now my "constant grinning" is "creeping" everyone out.
So this is going to be a slow read for me unless I can get some alone time because this thing is really too funny for words. I mean there were some definite "AWWWWW" moments. Still, one of the funniest things I have ever read.
I do see some of the bots as being OOC but the funny more than makes up for it and honestly, I just can't stop laughing long enough to be mad.
I am loving this so far and I really cannot wait to see where it goes.
So this is going to be a slow read for me unless I can get some alone time because this thing is really too funny for words. I mean there were some definite "AWWWWW" moments. Still, one of the funniest things I have ever read.
I do see some of the bots as being OOC but the funny more than makes up for it and honestly, I just can't stop laughing long enough to be mad.
I am loving this so far and I really cannot wait to see where it goes.
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, woman, you need to write more! Absolutely fantastic story. TOok me a week or so to chew threw it..but man...it's like a drug. But good drug...or maybe a brownie...
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, keep up the good work, things are getting really interesting!
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love LOVE your story. I just read it in two days and I can't wait for you to have more. I thought Bee and Barricade were going to end up together! I was suprised but delighted when you had Sam and Barricade linked. I just love it!! I really enjoy the way you right and how the writing just sucks you in. I hope you continue this soon !!
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so addicted.. I love how you have this story headed.. Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read your LJ blogs(no account there so can't comment) and I thought you might enjoy this
http://midydoof.deviantart.com/art/TF-shield-thine-eyes-kiddies-128155607
http://midydoof.deviantart.com/art/TF-shield-thine-eyes-kiddies-128155607
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please say this one is going to be updated soon! I'm totally DYING to get to the more involved Barricade/Sam! (At least, I presume that's where this is going, and if it is, I CAN'T WAIT!) I really love this story; I've spent the last three days playing catch-up. Got to have more!
Oh, and I almost forgot: When you mentioned Agent Knight, I almost sprayed my monitor with coke, 'cause my first though was Knight Rider. And then they had to go and make a joke about it!
Oh, and I almost forgot: When you mentioned Agent Knight, I almost sprayed my monitor with coke, 'cause my first though was Knight Rider. And then they had to go and make a joke about it!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there :D
So there's 144 chapters so far... I read them all in 4 days. Your fic was that awesome, I had to read it as soon as I could. I like where it's going, and the way you switch back and forth between the different characters.
So many things that I could comment on, I don't know where to start, but if I included everything this review would be too long XD
However I do love the way the couples interact, they're all so entertaining. Loving Ratchet and Jazz (and the others) taking charge of their husbands XD so awesome. And sometimes scary. I'd be wary of Ratchet ^^
Barricade is just fantastic. I'm looking forward to what will happen with Sam and with Bee. Really looking forward to it... and more chapters. I should have read this slower, there's not enough chapters now D:
lol Captcha: of fatherland.... an omen?
So there's 144 chapters so far... I read them all in 4 days. Your fic was that awesome, I had to read it as soon as I could. I like where it's going, and the way you switch back and forth between the different characters.
So many things that I could comment on, I don't know where to start, but if I included everything this review would be too long XD
However I do love the way the couples interact, they're all so entertaining. Loving Ratchet and Jazz (and the others) taking charge of their husbands XD so awesome. And sometimes scary. I'd be wary of Ratchet ^^
Barricade is just fantastic. I'm looking forward to what will happen with Sam and with Bee. Really looking forward to it... and more chapters. I should have read this slower, there's not enough chapters now D:
lol Captcha: of fatherland.... an omen?
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, all I have to say is...MORE!!!!!!! This is great; I am definitely loving this series. (Especially the Barricade/Sam interaction) Hoping that this is not the last we will be seeing?
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so upset I hadn't read it earlier then now. Keep up the wonderful work, as for the spelling, it doesn't matter, it's still comprehendable. Anyway, I just wanted to say your story is amazing and that I can't wait to see what happens with Barricade x Sam and... how Bumblebee and the rest of the group is going to take it, plus how Sam is going to react now that he knows what's going on!
<3
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so upset I hadn't read it earlier then now. Keep up the wonderful work, as for the spelling, it doesn't matter, it's still comprehendable. Anyway, I just wanted to say your story is amazing and that I can't wait to see what happens with Barricade x Sam and... how Bumblebee and the rest of the group is going to take it, plus how Sam is going to react now that he knows what's going on!
<3