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I'd really love to know just what's going on between Ravage an Sam. It's interesting how it seems Sam an his great grandfather seem to have a connection to Primus.

You know, I actually never laughed during "Dew Drop In". However, I think that's because it highlights the difficults of caring for the gremlins, which far outstrip those of the sparklings on the way. They're sparklings, but are old enough to have the equivalent impulsive and self-gratifying urges of toddlers....but with extreme intellegence, dexterity, and strength. The gremlins have no caretakers, were horribly abused, and have been left to fend for themselves for who knows precisely how long? The mechs, other than finding effective means of keeping them out of things, need to figure out ways to teach and discipline them. Seriously, all through the scene where they'd kidnapped the truck all I could think was "Oh, I would KILL them..." That's such a threat, for so many reasons. Risk of exposure, danger component, possible damage to base, etc. They need to figure out a place to keep them, even if they just kind of become the base-at-large's little group of wards. I think top on my list right after that would be discipline and acceptable behavior, because I sure as HELL would make it clear that such behavior was unacceptable and would not be tolerated.

Sorry, I got bitchy and lectured....It just struck me...I think I sometimes overthink these things and take them too personally.
Nacht

I was so happy when I saw that you had updated so much

I could not stop laughing when I rad the terraformers antics

I was happy to read up on the decepticons

my heart broke when Megatron cried out to Optimus

the only words I can say for optimus' last line are

"OH
MY
GOD"
Seriously, you rock

I should be sleeping I have work in the morning 8D

Barricade an Sam are Linked?? How'd that happen? Poor Bee. I'm still gonna keep my fingers crossed for a Sam/Barricade/Bee hook up. Thought that was cute with Ravage sleeping at the foot of Sams bed.

Hi, first I want to say I love your story and have been following it from the beginning, and I should apologise for never bothering to review before - put it down to the fact that I usually read each update at 2am when I'm barely able to string a coherant sentence together. Today however, I've been reading your mega update in the lovely sunshine so here I am.

I really love your characterisation, you've made even the most hostile Cons interesting and oddly appealing, and the Autobots are just adorable - I love what you've done with Red Alert in particular.

The whole story is just full of great humour, there's something to chuckle over in almost every chapter, and some I've laughed at til I cried - much to the amusement of my family.

These 7 chapters are just more of your usual brilliance. The Gremlins are great (and greatly in need of a stern, authority figure to administer some discipline ;) ), I love seeing what the Cons are up to (it's usually hilarious) and Misfire is a total star, I'm dying to know what's going on with Ravage because he seems to have become very attached to Sam (it becomes more clear everytime they interact), Megatron calling out for Orion was so sad, and that last line was heartbreaking.

Like some others I'm desperately hoping for eventual Bee/Sam/Cade because the only thing better than Bee/Sam or Cade/Sam in my opinion is Bee/Sam/Cade, but I love all your pairings and have a definite soft spot for Blaster and the incredibly oblivious Soundwave.

I can't wait now for the next update.

NearMiss

That's like the most cruel cliff-hanger of all times!!!! Especially since I was rooting for Bee/Cade, since the Cybertronians really don't have that many options regarding partners, whereas Sam as a human can actually be chosy. But no, he goes for the giant alien robot. Or are you making it that Sam's into Cade, but Cade's into Bee (^^a fangirl's hope dies last^^) - well, I'll just have to write some stuff on my own, then, since this is your story and you're doing a great job so far....
still, hopefully, the next chapter that you're going to post is not with the team at the base - though, I really love Blaster, he's just too cute^^ I'm really curious, if Soundwave's gonna notice and like the change with the visor...he's so oblivous, simply great!

Please update soon,

Djaly

O-o-o oh I was so not expecting this latest post and now I can't wait to see what you are going to post next please keep posting thank you

you naughty, naughty girl!(er, not sure if your a girl or not) How dare you not update for almost a week and then give me a heart attack! But it was so cool!!! Keep it up!

P.S are you making it a threesome with it being Bee/Cade/Sam? or is it just Cade/Sam?
Davy

Awwww, poor guys being sea sick. Percipter seems to be enjoying himself though spotting fish. When Sam was sleeping in Barricade, got me wondering, how's he gonna take the news about Sam's attraction to him?

I know I haven't review for several chapters and I'm sorry. I'm just lazy. Anyway you have thrown me off kilter with each chapter, I would think one thing and it would be something else. I like a story where you have to keep guessing then when you guess it turns out that your wrong. Thanks for the great read.