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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaa, Misfire gets the last word. Poor jet. Really enjoyed these last couple chapters, can't wait to read the rest. Still not feeling right about Knight, an now Eddie bring up a base where they found Megatron?
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!?!?! Oh my God!! Oh. My God. OH MY GOD, YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must do a little dance now. [[dance, dance]] YAYYY!!! I am very pleased. Pleased pleasy please pleased!!!
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*twitches from awesomeness overload* Gah!! When I saw you had updated I was like, oh yeah!!!. Then I saw 140 chapters and I was like this... ?o_O? wasn't there 133 yesterday? Then I was like this... O_O OMG!!!!
134... I laughed at poor Will all red faced and this line was priceless... “You two go any further than that back there and I’ll scrap you myself, Soundwave be damned.” LOL!!! An aircraft carrier!! Now that's a ship!! I actually got to ride on an aircraft carrier once, the USS Eisenhower. My brother was asigned to it and they had a "Family Day" and my parents and I drove down to Norfolk. My mom was worried about seasickness but the thing was so big, I couldn't actually feel it moveing. Now we were just doing a couple laps around the Chesapeak Bay, so I don't know what it would be like out on the open water, so I'm not going to say you got it wrong with some of the mechs getting sick and dizzy. For all I know they could, also their systems could be sensitive enough to make them dizzy, who knows. Plus, Ratchet puking over the side was just too funny!!
135... Blaster is one of those characters I keep finding myself going "Awwww!" at. He's just that cute and add his worry about the visor and it's "awwww" times 2! “Just look at them!” “Look at what?” “Where’d they go?” This set of lines had me laughing hard and when you reveiled that the Gremlins had hijacked a Dew truck I just about hurt myself laughing. That little bit with Motorhead saving 'Blue and 'Blue then crying over him made me feel all warm and fuzzy!
136... LOL at them all almost tipping the ship over. I could so see everyone scrambling to get to the other side. Jazz on the ice and Sunny not getting to have fun with Sides was great.
137... *cheers at the return of her little sweetie* LOL those 'Con's are too much. Everyone's looking for someone and no one can find them. *snickers* And I just have to say, YES, You Tell'um Misfire!! Give'um Hell!! *latches onto her sweetie Seeker's leg and nearly purrs with joy*
138... It seems to me that Ravage is getting attached to Sam. It's so cute how he lays his head on Sam, like he's asking for a scratch behind the ear. *snickers*
139... “We haven’t even found any Energon yet.” “We found it!” “You were saying?” “Plan away,” GAH, LMAO!! They tryed to plan for everything, but never thought about having to dig for the energon. So funny. And who out there didn't love Ravage sleeping at Sam's feet?
140... O_O!!! Great chapter, absolutly wonderful. The action, the drama, the holy slag-ness of it!! Sam and 'Cade are linked! Poor 'Bee's gonns be so hurt. I almost teared up thinking about what must be going threw his mind. I'm sure Sam will be glad to know what he's feeling isn't just a crush but at the same time he's gonna be agonizing over 'Bee's feelings. OMG and you ended the update there!! You evil thing you! When I finished this chapter I was like... NO, don't stop there!!
All in all, this was a fantastic update and I can hardly wait for more. Until next time... *huggles*
134... I laughed at poor Will all red faced and this line was priceless... “You two go any further than that back there and I’ll scrap you myself, Soundwave be damned.” LOL!!! An aircraft carrier!! Now that's a ship!! I actually got to ride on an aircraft carrier once, the USS Eisenhower. My brother was asigned to it and they had a "Family Day" and my parents and I drove down to Norfolk. My mom was worried about seasickness but the thing was so big, I couldn't actually feel it moveing. Now we were just doing a couple laps around the Chesapeak Bay, so I don't know what it would be like out on the open water, so I'm not going to say you got it wrong with some of the mechs getting sick and dizzy. For all I know they could, also their systems could be sensitive enough to make them dizzy, who knows. Plus, Ratchet puking over the side was just too funny!!
135... Blaster is one of those characters I keep finding myself going "Awwww!" at. He's just that cute and add his worry about the visor and it's "awwww" times 2! “Just look at them!” “Look at what?” “Where’d they go?” This set of lines had me laughing hard and when you reveiled that the Gremlins had hijacked a Dew truck I just about hurt myself laughing. That little bit with Motorhead saving 'Blue and 'Blue then crying over him made me feel all warm and fuzzy!
136... LOL at them all almost tipping the ship over. I could so see everyone scrambling to get to the other side. Jazz on the ice and Sunny not getting to have fun with Sides was great.
137... *cheers at the return of her little sweetie* LOL those 'Con's are too much. Everyone's looking for someone and no one can find them. *snickers* And I just have to say, YES, You Tell'um Misfire!! Give'um Hell!! *latches onto her sweetie Seeker's leg and nearly purrs with joy*
138... It seems to me that Ravage is getting attached to Sam. It's so cute how he lays his head on Sam, like he's asking for a scratch behind the ear. *snickers*
139... “We haven’t even found any Energon yet.” “We found it!” “You were saying?” “Plan away,” GAH, LMAO!! They tryed to plan for everything, but never thought about having to dig for the energon. So funny. And who out there didn't love Ravage sleeping at Sam's feet?
140... O_O!!! Great chapter, absolutly wonderful. The action, the drama, the holy slag-ness of it!! Sam and 'Cade are linked! Poor 'Bee's gonns be so hurt. I almost teared up thinking about what must be going threw his mind. I'm sure Sam will be glad to know what he's feeling isn't just a crush but at the same time he's gonna be agonizing over 'Bee's feelings. OMG and you ended the update there!! You evil thing you! When I finished this chapter I was like... NO, don't stop there!!
All in all, this was a fantastic update and I can hardly wait for more. Until next time... *huggles*
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! OMG!
That was an amazing chapter, dearest author!
And I have to say that it was very clever of you how you eventually dropped the "bombshell."
God...I was so hoping this was the kind of "bombshell" the title of the chapter was referring to, and I was right! Yes... but also nooo~! Poor 'Bee... I'm still rooting for the Cade/Sam/Bee triad though. Maybe 'Bee has feelings for both Sam and 'Cade? A girl can hope and pray.
I'm always looking forward to your updates. <3 x 1 Million!
That was an amazing chapter, dearest author!
And I have to say that it was very clever of you how you eventually dropped the "bombshell."
God...I was so hoping this was the kind of "bombshell" the title of the chapter was referring to, and I was right! Yes... but also nooo~! Poor 'Bee... I'm still rooting for the Cade/Sam/Bee triad though. Maybe 'Bee has feelings for both Sam and 'Cade? A girl can hope and pray.
I'm always looking forward to your updates. <3 x 1 Million!
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BTW... The Ironhide/Will moments are wonderful and funny. And when Megatron screamed out for "Orion" I was choked up... *Sniffles* Still am....
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok this has been bugging me since I got to the chapters where 'Bee and Barricade are actually civil to each other. Are they meant to hook up? I mean I think I'm picking up those hints, but who knows. Please!!!! Are they?
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I’ll have to jump on the Overly Suspcious Bandwagon and say Knight seems hinky. Initially, totally cool, mellow military guy, but once he began interroga—ASKING Will questions, I went “wait…..” Those weren’t mild, curious inquiries, he was asking for DETAILS and particular nuggets of information. I also agree that he’s WAY too enthusiastic for comfort; I don’t care who briefed you, giant alien robots are a daunting concept and a person should have at LEAST a mild adjustment period to assimilate the idea and THEN the REALITY….Plus, the apparent attraction for Will, while hilarious and delightful for setting up all kinds of little not really tension, does not please me well.
Insert fangirlish scream because you had a steering-wheel kiss. You’ve no idea how badly I was hoping for one, I didn’t care WHICH couple did it, though multiple occasions would be delightful, I was just desperate for what I knew would be adorable. The fact that it’s my personal favorite couple just made my shriek of glee a bit more shrill.
Oh, the Ironnox, I could lap it up with a spoon, it’s so tasty! Jealous!Ironhide makes me simultaneously giggle and shake my head. So adorable and so unnecessary. Though, in his defense, I do NOT think it’s Will he’s worried about. He knows neither of he nor Will are even vaguely interested in going anywhere. Knight, even outside my doubt of his trustworthiness, seems intent on pursuing our poor ranger and there’s no knowing how aggressive he’ll be or what he may try……which just makes him sound even creepier and he hasn’t even taken advantage of anything or one yet! So, my reaction to the Shenanigans in the car went as follows: “yay, Ironhide and Will” :} , “lol, jealously is silly” ☺, “… “show me…?” ‘-‘, ::reads bit about excitement and the opening of belt buckle:: OO, o____o, 8D, JOOOOOOOOOY! Then it cut to Barricade and I went DAMMIT, but it’s fine because the implication was there and that gives me gladness and hope for future encounters we get to witness. Shining, beautiful hope….. Hey, it’s my favorite couple, and they are both sadly unloved and what fiction they DO receive is often wanting while your writing is superb. Plus, the way I figure, we may get more scenes, or even that one revisited and witnessed with all the side stories you’re apparently planning….Yes, I know you’ve only got four currently, but hope springs eternal.
Jazz is such a bastard, but ‘Hide is well suited for it. Even beyond the truck-bed and functional nature of hauling tied to his alt mode, he’s one of the strongest mechs and thus capable of carrying even heavier loads.
Keep on going; though, the idea that this fic will end burns my soul.
Nacht
Insert fangirlish scream because you had a steering-wheel kiss. You’ve no idea how badly I was hoping for one, I didn’t care WHICH couple did it, though multiple occasions would be delightful, I was just desperate for what I knew would be adorable. The fact that it’s my personal favorite couple just made my shriek of glee a bit more shrill.
Oh, the Ironnox, I could lap it up with a spoon, it’s so tasty! Jealous!Ironhide makes me simultaneously giggle and shake my head. So adorable and so unnecessary. Though, in his defense, I do NOT think it’s Will he’s worried about. He knows neither of he nor Will are even vaguely interested in going anywhere. Knight, even outside my doubt of his trustworthiness, seems intent on pursuing our poor ranger and there’s no knowing how aggressive he’ll be or what he may try……which just makes him sound even creepier and he hasn’t even taken advantage of anything or one yet! So, my reaction to the Shenanigans in the car went as follows: “yay, Ironhide and Will” :} , “lol, jealously is silly” ☺, “… “show me…?” ‘-‘, ::reads bit about excitement and the opening of belt buckle:: OO, o____o, 8D, JOOOOOOOOOY! Then it cut to Barricade and I went DAMMIT, but it’s fine because the implication was there and that gives me gladness and hope for future encounters we get to witness. Shining, beautiful hope….. Hey, it’s my favorite couple, and they are both sadly unloved and what fiction they DO receive is often wanting while your writing is superb. Plus, the way I figure, we may get more scenes, or even that one revisited and witnessed with all the side stories you’re apparently planning….Yes, I know you’ve only got four currently, but hope springs eternal.
Jazz is such a bastard, but ‘Hide is well suited for it. Even beyond the truck-bed and functional nature of hauling tied to his alt mode, he’s one of the strongest mechs and thus capable of carrying even heavier loads.
Keep on going; though, the idea that this fic will end burns my soul.
Nacht
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I read the part where Will kissed Hide' I was like "Awwwww, YESSSSSSSS!" and I wrung my hands with anticipation when he reached for his belt. This coupling is just too just, but you keep teasing us D: You made me an addict! When I read that WheelJack got hit I was like "OHNOES D:" but I just had to laugh at Ironhide in the end. I thought they were made of sterner stuff so I was surprised when Ratchet said that the hit was almost fatal D: You sure do know how to keep us on our toes.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ironhide is jealous XD Doesn't Will know it's not a good idea to distract the driver? I like how one of the birds wants to circle around it. Ironhide is going to need to get cleaned after the caribou
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love Red Alert because he's crazy.