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*drags herself to her computer* Sorry for my lack of reviews but May has been a pain of a month. I spent most of this past week doing inventory. *shudders* But anyway, on with the review....

129... a total LOL chapter. I loved the Grimlins folowing 'Force around, then "trying" to help. Neurotoxic and Spindle playing in the pile of junk like little kids was just too, too cute!! Blaster was mighty cute also, being all confused about Hound not knowing what Mirage's reactions will be. I think my favorate line from this chapter has to be... “‘Upper crust’?” Hound repeated the phrase puzzled. “Toast?” LMAO!!!

130... *fans herself* is it hot in here or just Inferno and Red Alert? Great chapter! It was nice to see what's going on in Inferno's head and a bit of his reasons for worrying so much about Red. I laughed at “Red, I don’t think-” “You finish that sentence and you can sleep with Crikey,” then I laughed at “You’re squishing me.” and I nearly hurt myself laughing at...“HOUND! WHY ISN’T THERE ANYONE WATCHING THESE THINGS?” LMAO!!!

131... two words... Perceptor... snowdrift. OMG!!! I think I really did hurt myself that time. I could totally see him headfirst in the snow, aft in the air, arms flailing as everyone laughs.

132... Hmmm, something don't feel right about that guy Knight. Never trust a cheerful, perky person I always say. A word of advice for Knight, "Don't hit on a guy with a 30 foot robot for a boyfriend."

Well, I think that's it for now. As always, looking forward to next time!!!

Will has lots of fans, I don't know if any are guys though. I started giggling like a crazy when Knight met Will. Ironhide probably isn't going to like Will's fan.

Megatron has such a elegant way of saying things XD

*grins*

Hey! I absolutly LOVE this story! Hehe... I've been reading non-stop since, uhm... eh, ok - for about 2 days now, and damnit! It's a GREATE story!
*happy*
Ok, darling. Keep writing, please? I'll keep reading, promise.
/Nelleh

Hay, I was told yo umay not like sugestions, butI can't help but ask.. Can you bring in Blurr and wreck-Gar? I've watched the New animated Saried and they are two of my favorite characters. Anyway, your story is ASOME! plase continue.

So, while I'm amused by the idea of future sparkling hijinks and the various hoops the mechs will have to jump through to get the base ready for them; I'm worried about Judy and Carol's influence. Not that it wouldn't be applicable or wise, I just hope they follow what my mother called the most important rule of parental advice-giving. Let the parents be the parents. It's not your child, and while some advice when sought or opportune does not go amiss, let them find their own method and get the hang of it themselves. She's very firm about that, something my sister really appreciated, because when she'd come over with the baby it didn't become lecture and teach session but "let's let mommy and daddy relax and you can play with mimi and papaw".

Honestly, I'm pretty certain Carol will have no problem separating herself, it's Judy I'm somewhat worried about. Then again, she's a smart woman and mother, and no doubt knows and appreciates the importance of finding your own feet in parenting.

Hope you computer's done failing at its primary function.
Nacht

Yeah, exactly how log and far are they? *lol*
...and... uhm... will Barricade and Bumblebee share Sam? *just wondering*

Nice chapter :D

Poor Inferno, he just wants to make sure Red is alright. I never thought of his view, which might be why I thought he was annoying, still think he's annoying but I get him now. The gremlins are so cute. And I agree with catc10 on your chapters, they are addicting.

It is a SAD level of control you have over my life, woman.
You say, "Join us...this afternoon..." and I'm GLUED to my computer, waiting like a domestic cat for her food.
SAD LEVEL OF CONTROL.
I USED TO BE OKAY.
I could wait WEEKS before the need to catch up with your updates got me! And now I wait.
IT'S A DRUG. YOU LACED THIS FIC WITH CRACK, DIDN'T YOU?! YOU DID, DIDN'T YOU?!!
ME

Oh, that was sooo cute with the gremlins, following Rollerforce an then trying to help him.