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*GASP* Prowl actually talked to Barricade...willing...and not a threat, except against the Lambos but that doesn't count. I was laughing so hard I was crying as I was reading the high speed chase. That was brillant, and then the humans joined in, will there be a helocopter next time? Poor Optimus, he needs a vacation soooo bad right now........I have a feeling Megatron is going to be dangerous with crayons or markers. You story is the only real break I take from studying for finals.

Fabulous Chapter. It was so funny I could barely contain myself. The chase was awesome and the fact that they JUMMPED was hilarious XD. Those Cybertronions are sure mischievous. It's always a delight to read these chapters, though I'm always so dissapointed once I've realized that I've made it to the bottom of the page... D:



BTW how's the book you've been reading about cade? :]

Sorry for the way late review, computer died so I'm trying to figure out this laptop. Oh, enjoyed this chapter. :). Sooo, when they stop, who do suppose'll get to the Twins first? LOL!!!!

Oh Gods! I love your Red way, WAY to much! *cackles* I am very excited about the earth-born and Bluestreak/Motorhead. *is vibrating with anticipation* Is there even the slightest possibility that one (or all) of the earth-born will end up in a pairing? I hope so.

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Aww the Gremlins are so sweet. Hahaha I can't wait to see Inferno's reaction to the Pink panel. Why was the only spare panel they had pink? o_O

*snickers* Gotta love Rollerforce, “He might have been overcome by my wonderful presence.” LOL! When I read "there was a small hole, about the size of a dinner plate" I was like "what?" and then went "Duh, to them that is small. tehe. Bluestreak and Motorhead are SO cute!! I love how they're starting to finish each others sentences. I hope they get together soon. What a surprise for the others when they get back.

Motorhead - Oh yeah, by the way boss, I'm dateing one of the 'Bots!

'Cade - o_O

BTW.... just wanted to let you know two things. First my mom's out of the hospital and doing well. Second, I bought my first Transformers action figure.... Barricade!! *huggles Lil' Cade*

*meanwhile, back at the ranch... er.. quarry, Hook is tending to his latest patient. Starscream glares, or rather tries to glare at Misfire, but with one optic in his hand and the other hanging on by a wire, it's not easy to do*

TC - Wow, I never knew humans could move that fast.

Skywarp - I never knew humans could be so vicious!

Misfire - I think I'm starting to like this human!

*from her spot in his hand, she purrs up at Misfire, "I like you too!"*

*Dropped Jaw* Are you implying that Will is.....pregnant? Whos, I thought it was going to be Ironhide. *Laughing hysterically* The parking lot scence with all the screaming was second best part of the chapter ^_^ The fact that Epps, Sam, and Miles continued to eat peacefully was the best. Seriously, is Will pregnant? That has to be uncomfortable for the rest of the human guys when they find out. The women will think it's funny. Ironhide is going to freak out! If Will is pregnant, am I totally off base?

Those Cons are always up to something :] Can't wait for some more will x ironhide Theyre just so cute together

Ok, read the A.N. in Chp 106. To start, I am one of those literature fanatics... I have had NO problems reading the story. I have have noticed errors peripherally, but truthfully they don't detract from the story at all, so relax. I have read MUCH worse fics. Some people don't know how to string 2 sentances together in proper english, much less an entire fic. If readers are having trouble reading this then why are they bothering? If I can't read something because it's so terribly written then I don't bother, there are other fics out there. My advice is to ignore them, some people have too much time on their hands.

As for you characterizations, I ADORE the way you've portrayed the characters. It is your characters and story tht keep me coming back week after week. Some of the lines you drop have me chuckling all day whenever I remember them. Ignore the haters, they are jealous. You have one of the best TF fics out there that I've read so far (and I've read alot.) Thanks to RL I can't read the posts daily, but you make my week.

Cheers,
Rena

Well, what kind of trouble are these three . . ah . gremlins gonna get into. :) An Bluestreak an Motorhead going on a little road trip? Awwwwww. :)