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by Huronoryu

person Gray-Clouds
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If I had to listen to them singing that I would shoot myself D: Prowl and Jazz's reunion was cute.
person inuren
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
TO BlackDragonQueen
I have been following cover me and am enjoying every post and I am saying this with all sincerity slag em if they wanna be anal pricks obviously they need to take the stick out there butts and appriciate the story and it's author if they don't like it big deal!!! It would be a shame if you stopped posting because of the few who have nothing better to do then insult other people's work as if when they started they didn't or still don't make mistakes of there own. Please keep posting
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*nearly laughs herself sick* Oh my gosh, what fun!!! I so did not see that comeing. I thought that Frenzy and Rumble were messing with the engines of those cars so that they wouldn't start. I never thought those two were cleaning them out. LOL!!! I hope no birdwatchers were around. Could you imagine their reactions, "What the hell kind of birds are those!?!?" haha!! I loved the banter between Optimus and Ratchet.

“Do you mind? I’m trying to be reassuring here." LMAO!!! Optimus is becoming such a pessimist.

*settles in and continues her Misfire-watch* "He's gotta come home sometime."

*hidden behind the tree line, Misfire grumbles* "She's gotta go home sometime."
person Timberwolf
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Ravage. Hissing at the dog in the next truck, LOL! Rumble an Frenzy/Megatron love to know what they were thinking taking all that stuff LOL.
person Gray-Clouds
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooo Bad cons! I want me some IHOP now D:
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do like your story, but I never expected an English professor to write it. Perhaps your critics are out of work English teachers looking for work? You do well enough for me. I look forward to a new chapter each day. The worst thing about your story is that eventually it'll be over.

Take care until next time!
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We love you!! ::gives cookies:: I agree with you if people cant understand that mistakes happen sometimes(especially with your schedual) then the back button is for them. I personally have seen people who go over things for a full month(school) and have a lot worse problems than any i haven't seen in yours. On the note of fluidity, i have seen the movie and animated, i see no problems with characterisation(sp?) at all. Things happen, you have to adapt to it. We are cheering for you ::waves paper fans:: YAY GO BDQ! WHOOT!
person Nacht Kind
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I really like your story, BUT I think it's crap that people are trying to criticize your method of writing. Last I was aware, YOU were the author and thus wielded the almighty pen. Anyone who wants to nitpick can lick my nonexistent scrotum.

I love your characters, they're so relatable and endearing. The only one I feel bad for regularly is Optimus, who often seems to be heckled unmercifully, though it's never truly hurtful or mean and he takes it in stride and is (usually) agreeable about it. I love him so much, it's silly. I think it might be his voice in the movie, so solemn!

I adore this story so much and, dammit, you're a MACHINE for being able to update everyday. What the hell do a few typos really amount to?! I admit that I once submitted something to be brought to your attention, but that was an entirely different WORD with a COMPLETELY different meaning(one implied pleasure, the other deterioration and stripping loss of vitality) that I wasn't sure you'd intended.

Misfire needs some love, hardcore style. I'm so hopeful that SOMETHING will happen for the poor mech and he'll get some appreciation.....::mutter::possiblyaloveinterest....Cause you KNOW that'd be adorable, he's awkward enough NOW, and the bizarre fumbling of romance?! It's GOLD!

Keep on truckin'!!
Nacht
person Gray-Clouds
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another entertaining chapter, a job well done. I wonder what Megatrons and Optimus' relationship was like back in the day.

Don't mind people's critique. Your fic is wonderful and you are wonderful for sharing it with us. If it's something that you enjoy doing then don't let anyone hold you back from it. Its only good as long are you're having fun so try not to make it something that you will come to loathe. If those g oner's have a problem with OOC then they can go read another fic. it's not like someone is holding a gun to their head telling them to read. I started when there was only 43 chapters and got hooked. I love G1 and the movie and I love how your fic brings it all together. I can barely wait to read the next chapter once I've finished the latest. No one's prefect and they should be grateful that you get the chapters out to us so fast. If they can't deal with grammatical errors then they can shove it. If they think you're story is OOC then they should take a look back at the G1 series and realize that that series was full of crack. I tried watching and I kept laughing at the absurdity of it all. The portrayal of the characters hilarious and your plot is captivating. Good fics always die when there's a lack of reviews or flames. As long as your write there will always be an audience and you can't please everyone. Carry on with your head held high and your fans will continue to cheer you on.


P.s. I am dying for some misfirexstarscream cause of their current relationship D: I', a sucker for the kicked puppy and the brute relationships. You fic has gotten me hooked onto things that I thought I would never read. I previously despised the thought of a human x transformer but you've converted me. Thought I am a bit iffy on threesome but who knows, if it's written the write way it just may be able to convert anyone. Thanks for the daily chapters and have a nice day
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*hug* Don't let the naysayers discourage you. Even if there ARE a few mistakes, the rest of your story is very well written, especially compared to some of the things I've seen over the years. It just makes the occasional slip-up that more obvious - they're far enough in between that when they -do- show up, the reader stumbles over them.

That's my theory, at least.

Anyway. I for one am happy with Cover Me so far. I've gotten used to reading the new chapter every day, though I've skipped a day or two sometimes, and had to catch up. Not really sure which I prefer. I suppose if I sat down and read the whole thing from the beginning (again), the unusual lack of chapters containing naughty bits would be much more obvious than it is going day by day, but that's alright. It's very enjoyable as-is, and those of us who crave the naughty can get it elsewhere between chapters. :3

tl;dr: Keep up the good work!