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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop writing this story. I found this and I was hooked. I look forward to your updates. I like the way the characters are interpreted because something interesting is going to happen and it's going to be funny. This is one of the best Transformer fics I've found.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the energon song, too bad it's driving the poor Con's nuts, an now Megatron's starting to sing it. LOL.
Groundhog's gonna have to pull Motorhead to the side soon, he's making poor Bluestreak a nervous wreck keeping an eye on him, though I think the two of them would make a nice pair. Can't wait till they get the whole story on the sparklings.
Groundhog's gonna have to pull Motorhead to the side soon, he's making poor Bluestreak a nervous wreck keeping an eye on him, though I think the two of them would make a nice pair. Can't wait till they get the whole story on the sparklings.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter.....Best part was when the RTP pointed out, why not use the basement. And then singing, OMG the singing *evil laugh* that's priceless. Will there be singing when they all get together again?(Please say yes)
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Motorhead stalking a wary Blue has got to be one of the cutest things ever. And I am so glad someone finally had the idea of using the underground base, its been driving me crazy since they found the thing. And I must say, the mention of what to decorate the nursery with was a fun little tidbit of giggles.
On a side note, I don't know way people have been bothering you so much about spelling mistakes. If I didn't have spell-checker... lets just say bad spelling runs in the family, and leave it at that. I have read far, FAR worse spelling and grammar mistakes, so don't let it get to you. You are a good fanfic author; this is one of my favorite TF fics. That is more than I can say for 85% or so of everything else I've read on the internet.
mapleflavored@yahoo.com
On a side note, I don't know way people have been bothering you so much about spelling mistakes. If I didn't have spell-checker... lets just say bad spelling runs in the family, and leave it at that. I have read far, FAR worse spelling and grammar mistakes, so don't let it get to you. You are a good fanfic author; this is one of my favorite TF fics. That is more than I can say for 85% or so of everything else I've read on the internet.
mapleflavored@yahoo.com
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The twins in vegas would be awesome :D and I feel like going to SF now and looking for some autobots!
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! Please! I love Cover Me! I think that it's awesome that you're actually updating everyday like you said you would and I love this story! Reading this is THE highlight of my day. I can always count on this to make me laugh like I'm crazy. If people keep on nagging you about mistakes then take out some book that's really popular and point out that it too has mistakes. Even though Harry Potter was crazy popular I found mistakes in it, so everyone makes them. I've been reading fanfiction for seven years now. I've very rarely found stories that I instantly loved and know I will remember for the rest of my life. This is definitely one of them. Cover Me makes the top 5 of my all time favorites. Thank you so much for creating this story and for going through all the *crazynaggingangstflamerpeople* stuff that comes with it. You took these characters and made them your own babies. Thank you! I like what you did to them!
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't take those "mistake" reviews to heart, actually I find it kinda rude to do that to someone who put so much work into a great story. Personally, I'd be lost not to have this story to look forward too. Now for the review. What did the Twins think they were doing in the pool?LOL! Bad cars, bad cars!LOL. An Prowl should've know that the other Autobots would want to help when the Sparklings come along. Loved where Barricade an the othes tried to scatter when Epps showed up, poor Soundwave hasn't found out that theirs another "bat" to be worried about. :).
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*waves from her spot near Misfire's knee* First off, let me praise this chapter. I loved it, just like I've loved every chapter before it. Epps finding out about Megs, the twins in the fountain, Prowl's fears of being a daddy, even Megatron's dislike for Sam shortening his name to Meg were all wonderful. You are doing a great job and I truely appreciate all the work you've put into this story.
Now, onto a bit of a rant myself. *clears throat* Nitpicky people are a pain in the aft!! While I myself have not written in many years, not since the chat/roleplay group I belonged to when belly-up, I do still have to deal with nitpicky people. I've stood at the counter at work for 10 to 15 minutes while some lady compares two of the same figurine to see which one is "better looking." I feel like screaming, "THEY ARE IDENTICAL!! They Were Made From The Same Mold, Painted By The Same Person And Packed In The Same Type Of Box. PICK ONE ALREADY!!!" But I don't because then I'd get in trouble. *pouts* But anywho.... I've noticed spelling/grammer errors in your work, but you know what... I don't care!! With storytelling as good as yours, I can SO overlook a few mistakes because I'm enjoying myself too much. Somedays all I have to look forward to after work is dinner and this story right here. I've even found myself watching the clock, counting down until I get home and hopeing you've posted that days chapter already. Keep this in mind, nitpicky people are probably unhappy people with nothing to do but find faults in others and make them unhappy too.
Semi-rant #2... OOC-ness. Believe me, you're characters are much more in character then some stories I've read. I've seen some that have Megatron lay down his weapons, pick up a palet and paintbrush and spend the rest of his life traveling the backroads of the country painting landscapes. Ok... I've never seen that, but some are just as strange and OOC. Besides, from what I've seen from other stories and their reviews, there are some people who, if you're not going by the original series, think that you're a blasphemer and should be burned at the stake. I think you're doing a great job and everyone is very believable.
So, anyway, that's what I think and I think you should do what's right by you. Just know that I, and from what I've seen, several others here on AFF and on Live Journal are behind you 100%!!!
*gives BDQ a great, big HUG before turning to find.....*
"HEY, Get Back Here!!!"
*Misfire runs, jumps and flies away from his crazy fangirl*
*grumbles under her breath* "He has to come back some time!" *sits and waits*
P.S. No dought my review has some spelling errors, but you know what.... I don't really care. ;P *giggles*
Now, onto a bit of a rant myself. *clears throat* Nitpicky people are a pain in the aft!! While I myself have not written in many years, not since the chat/roleplay group I belonged to when belly-up, I do still have to deal with nitpicky people. I've stood at the counter at work for 10 to 15 minutes while some lady compares two of the same figurine to see which one is "better looking." I feel like screaming, "THEY ARE IDENTICAL!! They Were Made From The Same Mold, Painted By The Same Person And Packed In The Same Type Of Box. PICK ONE ALREADY!!!" But I don't because then I'd get in trouble. *pouts* But anywho.... I've noticed spelling/grammer errors in your work, but you know what... I don't care!! With storytelling as good as yours, I can SO overlook a few mistakes because I'm enjoying myself too much. Somedays all I have to look forward to after work is dinner and this story right here. I've even found myself watching the clock, counting down until I get home and hopeing you've posted that days chapter already. Keep this in mind, nitpicky people are probably unhappy people with nothing to do but find faults in others and make them unhappy too.
Semi-rant #2... OOC-ness. Believe me, you're characters are much more in character then some stories I've read. I've seen some that have Megatron lay down his weapons, pick up a palet and paintbrush and spend the rest of his life traveling the backroads of the country painting landscapes. Ok... I've never seen that, but some are just as strange and OOC. Besides, from what I've seen from other stories and their reviews, there are some people who, if you're not going by the original series, think that you're a blasphemer and should be burned at the stake. I think you're doing a great job and everyone is very believable.
So, anyway, that's what I think and I think you should do what's right by you. Just know that I, and from what I've seen, several others here on AFF and on Live Journal are behind you 100%!!!
*gives BDQ a great, big HUG before turning to find.....*
"HEY, Get Back Here!!!"
*Misfire runs, jumps and flies away from his crazy fangirl*
*grumbles under her breath* "He has to come back some time!" *sits and waits*
P.S. No dought my review has some spelling errors, but you know what.... I don't really care. ;P *giggles*
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just thought you should know I absolutly love this story.
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gasps & pounces the author* no ending the story! I read this everyday after school, its sooo good *grins* plus, you know how rare it is to find mech/human relationship stories, specially ones of quality...and humor?