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NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Don't leave for good!!! I anticipate your chapters everyday! I f'ing love this story and how the characters are portrayed.... I actually prefer your version over their orginial personalities. lol Can't wait for the next one!! :)

You go girl!!
Takes all kinds of people to make the world go round and unfortunately we get stuck with the jackasses. Oops did I spell that right? I wonder if the grammer and spelling police will get me.
I think your story rocks. I have to be honest and say that most of the time I am so intent on the story that I never see grammer mistakes. And so what if there are. Fan fiction is for fun and not for some people to flaunt their supposed superiority over others. It would be different if every other word was spelled wrong, or you didn't know what a pronoun was, etc.
Do what I do when I get a flame or critcizing review. Print it out on paper and use it to wipe my butt.

Lots of love. Keep up this awesome story.
L

This story is, quite possibly, the best fanfic I’ve ever read. You show remarkable talent as an author with a unique writing style that allows the reader to become completely immersed in the story. The detailed ways in which you describe the situations in your story is amazing and you’ve managed to give each character a distinct personality that makes it almost impossible for the reader to not become attached. Not to mention how you’ve managed to incorporate humor into this story. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve almost fallen out of my chair laughing while reading this fic (which really isn’t a good thing seeing as I usually read it while I’m at work and my boss is starting to get suspicious ^__^). Also, in regards to all the negative reviews you’ve been getting, I would suggest ignoring them or disabling reviews if they’re bothering you that much. You can’t please everyone and if all they can do is nitpick details then why bother with them? You said that the reason you’re doing this story is because you enjoyed it and wanted to see where went. Well, I can guarantee you that there are plenty of others out there who are enjoying it and want to see where it goes at least as much as you do, myself being one of them. So please don’t let them discourage you from writing. You’ve got a good thing going here and I want to see where it ends up. So keep up the good work and update soon!

Noooooo!!!! Please don't stop writing because some people are super critical. Your story is one of the best I've ever read on a fanfiction site, it's actually kind of an epic story. Plus, if you stop writing, I'll never get to see the RTP's reaction when they find out what "Pregnant" means. As for this chapter.....Epps is awesome! I like how he though the whole situation was hilarious. Awwwe, Prowl is going to make a good dad, he's already worried about the sparkling. Bad Lambos, what were they doing in a pool? I loved that Uncle Ratchet will take care of any boo-boo ^_^ Wow, those sparklings will really be raised by a village of autobots.....YAY!!!!

poo rmisfire :( he needs some lovin

Aww, poor MisFire, nobody wants to listen to him. And sooo the Autobots little convoy gets separated again. LOL.

*Laughing hysterically* I love "Primus did it". Poor Prowl and Jazz, but great to make fun of ^_^ Poor Optimus, I'm surprised he didn't get a headache. Bad Lambos, did they go ahead to Reno? The best part, it's only day 1 *falls off the chair laughing*

Poor Optimus. He's gonna need a major vacation after this. Jazz, Bee, Barricade an the others at SanFrancisco? No good can come of this. LOL. Or worse yet Sideswipe an Sunny at Reno? Poor Ironhide an Prowl.

I love the "This is not a pound" comment. I love how happy-go-lucky Red Alert is when dealing with the other autobots. Simmons reaction was priceless. I love Frenzy's jokes. And take that sector 13, you're missing a clue!!

*laughing hysterically* I love Red Alerts last line!!! I'm with Judy and Mikaela, I want to see the RIP's reaction when they realize what "Pregnant" means ^_^ Kind of evil for Judy, but she should get some fun out of the absurdity ^_^