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*giggles* "Too late! The travel plans have made, the seats are all booked up! No room! Better luck next time.” Gotta love Perceptor, he finally got everyone's attention. LOL at Optimus shaking Perceptor like a ragdoll. Poor Misfire! *sniffles* He needs a hug!!!

Sorry about your computer, I hope you get it fixed soon.

Primus is insane :D And I wonder who the injured spark is D: It makes me sad. Can't wait to see what the next chapter hold. I find it fascinating that You have Misfire seem like an idiot one chapter, a real person in another, and then back to a clumsy off again. He's ever so amusing. Will we ever know what happened in LA with groundhogs team? The world may never know DUN DUN DUUUUUN

*cheers* Go Perceptor!!! That was too funny, the poor guy get's his big news out at last. I felt so bad for him when everyone walked out and he was left in the dark. I wonder what Megs ment by forgeting something. Don't tell me he knew about the Energon!! I loved Rumble's reaction to the news about "no sex." LOL!!

*munches on a chocolate bunny while waiting for tomarrow* Mmmmm, bunny ears! Happy Easter!!

Ack! What a twist at the end. I have faith in you and your work! Don't give up, nothing sucks more than in incomplete fic. Sunny is such a dork in this chapter

I wanted to thank you for the explanation provided in the author’s note, especially as you’ve taken such care not to reveal the plot prematurely, and as it had been something that was sincerely rubbing me the wrong way, I appreciate the consideration you showed enormously.

The chapter was, as per usual, highly entertaining. It’s a wonder the Autobots are able to explain anything, given how prone they are to chaos and general communication breakdown. Prowl made me giggle, as I knew he would.
I’m also curious as to the method of Primus choosing the carrier verses the sire. Very interesting. I also notice that Ratchet failed to check either himself or ‘Jack. XD

……Skywarp was adorable. He seems like such a fun time of crazy, the “I will cause mayhem and raise a bit of hell and make little sense” crazy verses Starscream’s “HOLYSHIT I HAVE CONTROL ISSUES AND WILL DESTROY THEM ALL BWAHAHAHAHA” crazy.

Woot,
Nacht

LOL. I'm starting to feel sorry for Starscream. That was cute the spark/firefly carrying a dart :), poor little guy with the broken wing. An shame on Primus for sending Sam back before he's finish. LOL.

Pregnant!!?? I think Prowl's gonna pass out when he gets the news. :). Wow, this was quite a surprise, though I had a feeling something was in the air for them to survive. So . . who's gonna get the baby Megatron? LOL.

Great chapter, wonderful execution, flowed well, HOWEVER I am now knocking the "I-know-everything-ever-because-I'm-a-woman-and-a-mother" Hat OFF of Judy's head. I mean, it's moved from hilarious and possible to exasperating and absurd. Her giving out sage advice wily nily? Absolutely, she's got experience and life lessons. Noticing the OBVIOUS attraction between 'Hide and Will? Hell yes, she wasn't the only one. Figuring out that a robotic alien species has spontaneously been given the ability to naturally procreate based on some moody behavior on the part of ONE of the 'bots who she didn't even know that well to begin with? Something's gotta give.

Don't get me wrong, I adore this story and like Judy plenty. I ALSO love it when one or the other party/person/sex can see and notice something that the opposing side doesn't due to experience/knowledge/expertise/instinct/what-have-you, but not at the expense of the other side regularly looking like oblivious dunderheads. Now, I'm probably being a bit picky because I'm so sensitive to all the instances of it, but that seems to be what's been happening repeatedly through this story.

Now, I'm going to apologize, as I truly don't mean this as an attack. This has simply been bothering me and I felt a critique to express my opinion wouldn't be unreasonable. I'm especially sorry if I came off as surly or rude; you're a wonderful author and I love this story, this has simply been a repeating motif of dubious function and waning charm that has stepped from the realm of amusing running gag into ludicrous disbelief.

I sound like a CRAZY bitch, and I'm sorry for that.

Can't wait for tomorrow(betting money someone's gonna shut down with the news).
Nacht

Side Note: What the HELL would Cybertronions' use as contraception?!

I died at the end when Jazz stood up and yelled for prowl. Try not to make Judy a know-it-all. We love her, but she shouldn't be all knowing. That's Primus' job(sort of) :) Excellent story. I'm in it for the long haul! and LOL when Sunny thought he was infected.

*squeals some more* Oh my gosh, is Skywarp pregers too?? That's sooooo cool!! Starscream's gonna freak when he finds out. I loved Ron's tidbit about Prowl's fast work. LOL!! There's so much about this chapter that was great it's hard to pick out anything else. It's that wonderful!! Keep up the fantastic work!!

*eyes light up* Ooooo, are they gonna have a baby shower???