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by Huronoryu

person navajo
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh i just love judy...cant wait for more.
person Timberwolf
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Ironhide. having to talk about Will an his romance. Loved Judy knocking Megatron down, gotta remember to stay on her good side. LOL.
person Elektra
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you that even tho I don't review. I love your story and look forard to reading it every day.
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. The dreaded Conversation With A Parental Unit. Poor, poor Ironhide. He's doomed.

I love Judy. She's such an awesome mom.

There just aren't enough words to appropriately fangirlishly rave about your story. It's well-written, has a great pace, the characters are nicely developed, and all the little touches are just garnishes that make it even better. Like Crikey the Croc. I hope he sticks around for a nice long time.

I can just see someone sticking up 'SAVE CRIKEY' posters all over the base.
person Timberwolf
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!!! Loved the last part. For an advanced race, sure can't keep a secret for anything. LOL! Think movie night just got postponed. Ravage being a sofa hog, bad kitty. I'm thinking Laserbeak'll get hooked on movie nights. Gonna feel sorry for Jazz once Ratchet finally gets his hands on him :). Loved 'Cade's answer as to how he was going to get the DVD's into the player. "That's what Sam's for."LOL!
You really make my nights, come home from work and wind down read this. Thanks.
person catc10
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How do I always manage to leave this for chapters to accumulate and then read through RIGHT AFTER something dramatic?
HOW?!
It's like...damn.
Seriously though? I really wanted to see Megatron transfer himself into Mile's cellphone or computer or something in order to hide. Might've helped them out some. I'm also a little peeved that Megatron revealed himself so quickly (it must be that earth-adapting anomaly).
ME
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*holds her side laughing* I was wondering who won that bet. I can't believe Megatron won. LOL!!! That must have been some virus to turn Megs into a raving loony overnight. You know, the more I read, the more Jazz moves up my list of favorites. “I think my processor is malfunctioning. I could have sworn I just heard Megatron’s voice.” You gotta love Jazz!! Also, that was too sweet when Frenzy and Rumble reconected.

*waits for tommarow and wonders how long Megatron's secret will be kept this time*
person Timberwolf
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm, (pacing back an forth, stopping) I . . . like, I really do with how this is going, it's a real interesting twist in bringing Megatron back, should be fun seeing Megatron coping with being in Frenzy's body. Just remembered the chapter that Primus seen a Spark wink out, now we know where it went to. I just hope Miles isn't making a huge mistake here.
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I catch myself doing this little happy bounce-wiggle in my chair every time I check your story and there's a new chapter. I really love it. It was good enough when you were doing a chapter a week, but now that you've decided to bless us with one a day, it's absolutely wonderful! Today's (87 - They Gave it Their Best Shot) had me rolling through the whole thing. ('Shortest secret EVER.' Pfftbwahahaha.) Anyway, thanks for being such a great author, and sharing your story with us. I can't wait till tomorrow's installment! Now to go read this one again...
person Djaly
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bee X 'Cade!.....I'm still hoping. Though, you really had me whooping/wondering where 'Cade's annoyed that Jazz is sitting next to Bee. Was that beacuse of Jazz or because of him sitting next to his Autobit? I mean, com'on!, first, they're sharing a garage and now, a hanger!! There has to be something happening! Especially since 'Cade's still "evil"...

Also curious about Megatron...poor Frenzy, having to share his body, and poor Rumble, having to share his mate!