rate_review Reviews

So . . . I just spent the greater part of this week attached to my computer so I could read this fic. I have no idea why anyone would complain of the length. How else would you be able to cover all the many plot points and side arcs for the different characters. I have to admit, I like your Sam much better than the way he's portrayed in the movies. Couldn't stand him ><

I haven't read any other reviews, but after reading some of your reactions to them I got a little frustrated. Not with you, with the reviewers. I AM a professional writer and while there are some minor issues I didn't give a flying fuck. I love this story with a passion that is a bit disturbing ;) You have a great voice and I love reading all the daily interactions between the characters. There will always-ALWAYS-be critics so don't take it too much to heart. Like you said, you are writing for you. I do the same I write because it's something I want to read and if other people happen to like it, cool. If not, no worries.

That all being said. I sincerely hope that you will continue to update. I'm in agony over here <3

Captcha: "Plotinus seems apropo ;)

a month has passed, where a continuation will be?

when it continued?

I wonder who in the Sam and barricades will be top and Bottom. I certainly would like to Sam Bottom and begat him nice little kiddies. looking forward to a sequel. I see you've started to spread this fan fiction site http://archiveofourown.org/works/489828?view_adult=true.

okay, reviewing here instead of at ff.net this time (sub0chick sends gold star cookies for this chapter), and have to say that this chap does help make up for the last one, but still mad about you torturing poor will and 'hide, you're gonna have to make it up to those boys lol. "You already did that!" Barricade snapped irritably. "Concentrate on surviving the next few minutes! Live now, fuck later!" so many funny things about that statement, mainly the fact that apparently 'cade didn't go very far at all and was still within sensor range of them at the very least, meaning he at least -heard- everything if he wasn't actually peaking around the corner and watching lmao. glad sam and bee got to have their "one time" (yeah right, i don't think you're gonna stick to that lol) and they kinda got 'cade settled down from his idea of going off on a suicide mission. keep up the great work, can't wait to see how you're going to torture the boys next :D

What a big f@&king' mess.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

ArchNemesis ^_~

Sarah is a bitch! I hope Judy gets a hold of her for what she has done to Will and Ironhide. Hopefully, ssomeone will find out what has happened to them, soon.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Pleaseupdate soon!

ArchNemesis ^_~

Story is great and very original.
This is my second time reading it;)

#186- what a nice treat to come back from an extended trip with no inet to. love the bots all arguing about the whole getting wet and who's bunking with who thing. and the kids not/wanting to go swimming lol. and bee's snuck off somewhere, that can't be good. can't wait to see what happens *skips off to read next chapter*

#187- omg, hide got sam a sex toy *dies laughing* and will's volunteered to answer any "questions" bwahahahahahaha and now for the big convo, can't wait, hope it's coming soon. that and more smut, love the story, but smexing is nice too cause you do a really really good job with it lol. keep up the awesomely fantastic work, can't wait to see what happens next :D