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by Huronoryu

person Gray-Clouds
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my goooood hahaha I am just dying for some willxhide now. They make such a cute pairing. I feel so sorry for rumble since his hubby hasn't been showing him any love. :/ Sam better watch his back
person Timberwolf
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's gonna be a real interesting talk between Barricade an Soundwave. :). I get a kick outta these visits to Primus, that was cute with the little firefly with the band-aid poor little guy.
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* When Inferno made that comment about "bringing home stray 'Cons" I had this sudden image of 'Bee holding Ravage and looking up at Optimus saying, "He followed me home, can I keep him?" LMAO!!! Go Jazz!! I loved how he snatched the gun and took down Prowl all without breaking a sweat... that is if he could sweat. “If he kills us in our sleep, you can say a big ‘I told you so’.” GAH, Jazz is the best!! Frenzy was too cool, placeing bets with the Twins. OMG, I can hardly stop laughing at the orb with the bandaid, that poor thing.

*laughs to herself as she waits for tommarow*
person Timberwolf
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Ironhide an Will finally . . ah. . errr got together. Love the bits with Primus an the orbs.
person Vally
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this may be in my top five chapters and not, surprisingly, because of the smut but because of the orbs and Primus!! They're just so awesomely funny and brighten my day every time they make an appearance!! ^^
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Primus and the Orbs were really rather amusing :] Where did the other orb go? and that was wicked awesome with hide and will
person Christi
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay! Hide & Will are gonna be creators, right?

Great chapter and great story!
person Nacht Kind
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Does anyone have a cigarette? 'Cause I am DAMN satisfied....

So, I personally found all of your intimate scenes thus far incredibly sensual and enrapturing, but that was bone-melting hot. I loved how you were attentive in including both sides' sensations, given the different nature. The fact that the vibrator was camou green made me snort and giggle a little. Maybe it's just me, but once it got into the thick of things I went "HOLYSHIT!WILL'SASEXKITTEN!!#@$@%(Q@#R)DVZ J%($@!!!!!!!!!!!!" and promptly died. I'm betting he's going to be somewhat sore tomorrow, though, if the vibrator was "rather large" and am impressed by the fact that he and 'Hide managed to wait a fair bit of time while he both inserted and grew accustomed to it. I'm going to expand on something Confuzzled_Neko implied and suggest Will invest in some lubricant; though cooking oil can work in a pinch and has the added bonus of, because of the amount of oil one has to use due to the thinness of its consistency, it spreads around and makes just about everything slick. Woohoo, eroticism. Plus, the idea of the woman going in the kitchen and noticing one of the partially empty bottles gone missing cracks me up.

Can't even believe I'm typing this, but 'Hide or Will could attach a strong magnet to the bottom so that it would be attracted to and attach to 'Hide's finger, who then would be able to better manipulate it and even actually thrust, instead of simply jostling it. Plus since it's a magnet, either could easily pull it off afterwards.

Now, maybe it's just me, but I've been thrilled and delighted in all of the sex scenes thus far and am curious that we seem to be getting a little glimpse into every couple. Simultaneously, I've been hoping we might be blessed with viewing couples again as the story goes on, but I need to throw myself on your tender mercies and beg/pray/hope/grovel that we see these two again.

My brain doesn't even know what to do with the orb disappearance, but kind of hopes, against ALL logic, that Will's the carrier for both the unmatched level of adorable and the never-ending shit Ironhide would get if he were with sparkling. Maybe Will can just nurture the spark or it can be tiny and grow after birth but be more along the size lines of Rumble or Frenzy. Then again, Cybertronions live a LONG time, so it's not like the spawn wouldn't have plenty of time to grow a few dozen feet. To save my brain, I'm just going to trust in Primus to use his godly mojo and work this noise out.

My heart is STILL aflutter and I blame you.
Nacht

P.S.- The whole Blaster and Soundwave thing? Seems to have the potential to be unreasonably cute and hell-raising at the Autobot base.
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Poor Optimus, he can't even get a decent amount of rest before all hell brakes loose all over again. I hope he can calm Prowl down. And I wonder what's up with Frenzy.

*ponders and waits for tommarow*
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Will is such a modest boy haha Another great chatpers BDQ <3