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by Huronoryu

person Timberwolf
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your doing a fantastic job with this story, love these three new ones. They're gonna keep everyone on their toes.
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"What could possibly happen?” *ducks under the covers and quakes with fear* Jazz is so right, you never, ever, EVER say that!! It's one of those dreaded "last words", like "Trust me, I know what I'm doing." and "It can't get any worse."

*chuckles* Uh oh... I wonder what the Twins are going to do now that they've been left behind. I loved Cade's grumpyness and eagerness to go. Under all that tough 'Con armor he's got a caring heart.. er.. spark. You can tell by his teams dedication to him and his resolve to rescue Frenzy... even if Frenzy is nuts.
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha that sucks that Frenzy got cookies and viruses. I'm so bummed that Barricade missed his team in the last chapter D:
person Timberwolf
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Frenzy sounds like he was in rough shape even before Sector 13 got a hold of him. Now Optimus has to worry about what the Twins are going to do since they got left behind.:) Great job.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Poor Rollerforce, being chased across countless statelines. LOL!!! I loved Groundhog basically telling Starscream to got to hell and they're dedication to their boss.

*chuckles as the RTP and Cade pass like ships in the night*
person Timberwolf
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Barricade's way of waking Sam. LOL.This should be interesting to see just how helpful Simmons' going to be, but I just hope they'll get Frenzy before anything happens to him. Love this story, a perfect way for me to wind down after work.
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay The decepticons are back :D
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just re-read the last chapter and had too add this... *snickers* Poor Perceptor. I think all those tests have made him paranoid. He's developed a bit of a knee-jerk reaction hasn't he. *tries feel sorry for him but can't stop laughing* I loved Optimus compairing Sam to Beeper and 'Cades method of wakeing Sam up. *can't stop giggleing* I eagerly await more!!!
person Confuzzled_Neko
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay more action! Hehe, do love the whole carrying the humans in hand thing & that Simmons is the only to notice.
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*watches Jazz run past* Dang he's fast!! I wonder if Ratchet will ever catch him? I laughed at Ironhide chaseing after that croc and Blue's eagerness to get off the base and have 'Cade in his debt. Speaking of 'Cade, I love the interaction between him, Bee and Sam. All three fighting over who's going. *chuckles at “Don’t tell the twins"*

Good Job! Keep it up! *waits yet again for tomarrow to come*