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Well, the title of the next chapter has me curious. It carries many a hidden meaning possibility. I am much looking forward to tomorrow!! A new chapter will be much loved after a long day at work and I would offer up the carrots my boyfriend is trying to grow to your plot bunnies but I'm not entirely sure they're even still alive much less edible... My boy hasn't much of a green thumb on him I'm afraid.

Shit, my other review got deleted so I have to type it all over again!! And my stupid computer won't let me freaking review, so I'm going to try this one last time. And if three thousand reviews turn up saying the same crap, sorry my bad. Just delete 'em. Anywayssss.


Firstly, it trips me out how Judy knows everything for, like, no frickin' reason. So LOL for that. And I've been following you story for a while(although I haven't been on the computer for a while so I had like ten chaps to read just now) and this stuff had me ROLLIN'!!! Funny stuff, dude. "Well, I can't just say 'hey, stupid!'. Then all the Autobots would look!" LOLs for that.


So I'm guessing that 'Cade is going to get with either 'Bee or Sam, but I'm betting on 'Bee because, ya know, they're the same species. Which brings me to Will and 'Hide! How is that even going to happen??? Are the going to make wild, passionate luuuuuurve the normal way or does Will just like, feel on his spark or something?? 0_____o Which brings me to the alien robot secks. WOWWW. 'Cause I was thinking about how, if I were in your shoes, how I would make that work and I got NOTHINGGG!!! You understand me?? NOTHINGGGG!!! So I was just like, WHOA!!! So random kudos and awesomology points for that. That was boss.


Also, I guess Sam is now getting some Cybertronic traits and it's about to Link to someone??? It makes sense!! And that'd be kinda cooool. And Miles and Makeala??? Working on it, hmmm???

I also just adore how you have like five hundred characters and haven't used OCs!!!! Well, except that Secter Thirteen guy, but there's really no way around that one is there??

I LOVE MISFIRE WITH ALL MY HEART, SOUL, BODY, AND BEING!!! Yeah!!! Love that kidd!! Also, I think Optimus Prime needs a boyfriend!!! I do, I do!!! He needs to get laid, fer sure!!! Anyways, AM-AYE-SING story!!! And answer my questions!!! The e-mail is right there!!!

Loved it. Optimus buttering up Barricade then Ironhide steps in an blows it. LOL. Then I half expected Ironhide to pull some kind of prank on Barricade to get even for the paint job. Now, I'm wondering what they found. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ooooo!!! *eyes the hole* I wonder what they found? I couldn't help but laugh at the Twins. Poor Sides keeps getting on the bad side of his brother. *snickers and counts down till tommarow*

I'm dying from the suspense, what is it? D:

You sure do know how to write a party scene :]

Yeah, you gotta becareful of those little plot bunnies.:) And Yeah, Ratchet and Wheeljack have . . . ahhh . . errr . . come together?:) I thought it was cute where niether one really knew exactly what to do. I think little Beeper adopted Optimus, since he's camping out on his desk.

*fans herself* My oh my! That was great, very sweet. I loved the whole, "What now?" "I thought you knew." thing between them.

*giggles at the cat rolling over and going back to sleep*

*squeals* I love weddings!! I thought the vows were wonderful, the line, “Ratchet, in all the times I’ve blown myself up" had me fighting hard not to laugh out loud. The Twins may need Ratchet's help later, all those smacks to the head! Hmmm, I wonder what is up with Sam. I've noticed how much Cade spots stuff that others don't. I bet it's because being surounded by mechs that'll stab you in the back in a heartbeat makes you much more observent.

*hopes you feel better soon and waits for tommarow*

Great wedding!! Poor Twins getting smacked during the wedding. LOL. That should be fun getting Barricade out on the dance floor. Now what's Sam gonna be in for scratching his chest? I think we're gonna have to lock Will and Ironhide in a room just to get them to talk to each other. This story is such a treat to look forward too. Hope you feel better soon.