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by Huronoryu

person catc10
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GLEE LIKE NOTHING HAS EVER BEEN GLEE-D FOR BEFORE.
*MANAICAL LAUGHTER*
I love you so hard...!!! I came back after something like two weeks expecting maybe two or three new chapters, and I got like...eight!!! YAY!!! *GLEE GLEE GLEE*
ME
person Timberwolf
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I swear BumbleBee an Barricade could be brothers. Loved Barricade's answer to his Autobit crack "Hey stupid." LOL!! It's to bad that Will still hasn't come to terms with his feelings towards Ironhide. Now the Twins have found out about waterballons? God help us.:). Sorry to hear your still not feeling well. I know it'll kill us out here, but we'll understand if you want to take a break an rest up. As always looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I don't know what is funnier. Cade teaching Wheeljack and the Twins about waterballoons, Jazz trying to make Hide smile or the "Hey, stupid" comment. All around funny!

I hope Will figures his feelings out soon. I can hardly imagine what poor Hide must be thinking. And just as a side note, I can't help but wonder where Soundwave is. *ponders what the Con and his group is up too*
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chapter had me laughing so much. I really needed it, it cheered me up after a shitty day. Get well soon
person Vally
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line made me want to wake up my boyfriend and make him bake me a cake just so I could lick the bowl despite the late, or early rather, hour... ah sweet memories! Anyway, you did brilliantly for being plagued by illness! I can barely sit up most of the time when I get sick least of all type or edit anything! And I have to say Primus is battling valiantly against Red Alert for spot three on my Fave Bot List! I also can't wait to see what happens with the dynamics of Sam's, Bee's and Cade's relationship as I'm sure it will be shifting in the near-ish future after the wedding havok dies down and Primus' plans begin to take form. Just a feeling and a hunch but we shall see, yeah?
I hope you feel better and if I could I'd send you some of the awesome, home-grown, herbal cold-cure tea my neighbor makes! It works miracles and doesn't taste half bad to boot!
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank Primus for reassuring Sam. Mother knows best. Get well soon D: I'd rather you rest then tire yourself out needlessly on unimportant things.
person Timberwolf
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, Mom's can solve anything. That was cute with Sam petting the spark making it purr then the other one wanting attention too. Now will Will finally talk to Ironhide? Hope you get over your headache.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Go Judy! A mother always knows what to say and sees more then you think. I had to laugh a little at her talk with Will. I wonder what Sides and Sunny are up to?

*eyes the Twins and wonders if she should hide under the bed*
person MiDemoni
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've been reading this fic for a some time but was unable to review it. So I'm really glad that I got this chance at last.

Firstly I must say that this is one of the best written stories I've ever read. The plot and narration are amazing and the characters are like flesh and blood. Well wires and metal, too... Most of the time I'm either laughing so hard my stomach hurts or turning green out of envy. I want to be able to write like this, too. My favorite character has been all along Barricade but lately Ratchet has been brilliant. It's most thanks to the wedding, I think. The scene about ratchet in a dress was hilarious.

Secondly the sheer promptness (I've no idea wether that is a real word at all...) of your writing is mind blowing. These chapters are really long and now you are posting every single day... Not that I've anything to complain. Reading Cover Me is one of my favourite pass-times. Just don't get Barricade killed and you have a fan ;)
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for weddings! what KP duty? D: It was a treat to read this after coming home from work.