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by Huronoryu

person Timberwolf
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, what an ending to this chapter. Poor Sam.
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Man, I don't know weather to laugh or cry! I knew Sam would have to find out someday but right before the wedding! Why does some of the wrost news always break before weddings? I did have to laugh at the Twins trying to make a dress for Ratchet and at Ironhide getting smacked around by Wheeljack for keeping him away from Ratchet.

*snickers at the thought of what might happen if Ratchet caught someone calling the "bride"*
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just had to add this. All this thinking about "the bride" just gave me a vision straight out of Kill Bill. I just had a mental image of Ratchet, sword in hand, faceing down a bunch of black colored mechs posing as the Crazy 88.

*bites her lip to keep from laughing cause she doesn't want the rest of the family wondering about her sanity*
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That dress would have been awesome! Too bad Sam found out about no more sparklings :[
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eeee I was so sleep deprived when I reviewed I forgot to put my SN D: p.s. lulz for Barricade
person Vally
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFL!!!! Christ on crack that was priceless!!! Misfire drunk on rocket fuel!!! Hmm... I wonder how exactly he got it though? I'm a Florida native so i've been to NASA a billion times and I can't imagine him getting very far. Sure they're all a bunch of nerdy saps but they don't have half bad security. Damn that's gonna bother me all night!! Still, this was just the thing I needed to uplift a crap-tastic day!! Loveing the daily updates like you wouldn't believe!!! *^^*
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol, that was a fun chapter. I love Misfire's line about the Squirrely.
person Timberwolf
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love these guys. Looking forward to tommorrow.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Poor hungover Misfire. I loved Cade's telling the others that Misfire's presence is probably good for them, bad for the other Cons. *snickers* You gotta love Cade, the way he messed with Ratchet and later tried to sneek away. And oh my gosh.... a wedding!!! *squeals with glee* I can hardly wait!!!
person Gray-Clouds
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The intimacy was nicely done . This chapter was lemon AND WAFF