rate_review Reviews

WHEEE! OMG that was great! Wish they was an actual film of Misfire careening around the airport! This story just keeps getting better & better! Though I wish soem Sam action would happen *sparkly kitten eyes*

LOL!!!!!!!! Oh, what a great chapter. LOL. Feel sorry for the poor little deer that Misfire kicked, poor little guy, he was just curious. LOL!!!! Bet he won't come back to that forest again. Loved it.

I waited all day for this chapter and it pained me very much when I got to the bottom of the page D: Hahaha the drunk Misfire was hilarious. Keep up the good work.

*squeals with glee* I love Misfire!!! I thought a sober Misfire was great but a drunken Misfire was hillarious. And I loved all of the other Cons makeing bets on who was going to screw up first. I couldn't help but laugh at the deer running away from the massive pile-up.

*waits for tommarow still giggling over "Misfire's a lush."*

That's kinda freaky what happened to Jazz's optic. hahaha you seemed to have made Primus veru loveable

That was cute Jazz trying to pawn off the report to Sam. And Yeaaa, Jazz and Prowl finally . . . errr . . ahhhh . . get together (grin). Looking forward to the next chapter.

*blushes* That was ... wow! You did an amazing job, that was beautifully written. I love your style, it's intimate and emotional without getting too mushy or sappy. Keep up the great work!

*hopes her blush goes away before tommarow's chapter*

You're updating almost daily?!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's like a christmas miracle, birthdays, and holloween rolled together!! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! I love Jazz and Barricade conspiring together. Are Barricade and Bumblebee are suppose to protect Sam like the prophecy said? How is Sam suppose to help the Cybetronians bring new sparklings into existance? Or am I completely off base on what that part of the prophecy ment? I think you did a great job on the prophecy, enough to get us guessing what's going to happen, but vague enough to make us second-guessing ourselves. I can't wait till the next chapter!

I love how you portray jazz! and I was randomly checking the story to read any interesting reviews and I discovered you had another chapter up and I read abou your gift. I love you so much!! This story brightens my day.

I love the prophecy bit, it was well written. The tid-bit about megatron made me sad. LONG LIVE MOP