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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was the sequence of events: '-' = o.o = o__o = O____O = OO = 8D
Updates everyday?!?! My heart can't take it! This is so amazing; it guarantees awesome fiction every single day, and that boggles my mind.
So, my love for Jazz has rekindled itself admirably. The description of what happened to all the other Autobots' paint jobs cracked me up. I loved what they did to Optimus for the subtly, yes of course you'd notice, but it's not glaringly poking fun or mocking (and thus possible disrespect) like 'Hide, Preceptor, or the Twins. Inferno and Red Alert cracked me up, too, primarily because of how prone they are to staying so close and now it's offensive to look at.
Methinks Ratchet might have a feeling about something between our favorite botling and Decepticon.
Prophecies, huh? I must say, you're making this all far too fascinating and entertaining for me to get anything actually done. Guardians of the day and night, well let's see. A normal day typically has some sunshine, which is typically a bright, cheerful yellow and night usually keeps is a bit more low-key with a subtle black. What two Cybers do we know with that coloring respectively and make it a point to personally and near constantly watch out for Sam?
You're badass, end of song.
Nacht
Updates everyday?!?! My heart can't take it! This is so amazing; it guarantees awesome fiction every single day, and that boggles my mind.
So, my love for Jazz has rekindled itself admirably. The description of what happened to all the other Autobots' paint jobs cracked me up. I loved what they did to Optimus for the subtly, yes of course you'd notice, but it's not glaringly poking fun or mocking (and thus possible disrespect) like 'Hide, Preceptor, or the Twins. Inferno and Red Alert cracked me up, too, primarily because of how prone they are to staying so close and now it's offensive to look at.
Methinks Ratchet might have a feeling about something between our favorite botling and Decepticon.
Prophecies, huh? I must say, you're making this all far too fascinating and entertaining for me to get anything actually done. Guardians of the day and night, well let's see. A normal day typically has some sunshine, which is typically a bright, cheerful yellow and night usually keeps is a bit more low-key with a subtle black. What two Cybers do we know with that coloring respectively and make it a point to personally and near constantly watch out for Sam?
You're badass, end of song.
Nacht
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Primus is my new favorite character in this story! I fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard when Primus was talking. I'm curious about what Judy's talking about.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the interaction between Sam, Jazz and Primus. LOL, though Primus isn't exactly forth coming with any answers for Sam though, poor guy :). Be back for chapter 57.
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* That was too funny. I loved Sam's frustration at the lack of answers and Jazz calling Primus "Papa". I just about fell off my seat laughing.
*counts the hours till tommarow*
*counts the hours till tommarow*
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay daily updates for my obsession! Don't think I've ever read a story this long with anything under PG rating.
Wheee, love the 2nd round of painting! So cute. Curious as to when Sunny might show the end result of his strangess...maybe one of those *fireflies* might be the problem hehe.
Wheee, love the 2nd round of painting! So cute. Curious as to when Sunny might show the end result of his strangess...maybe one of those *fireflies* might be the problem hehe.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*screams* OH... MY... Gosh!! Daily Updates?!?! *screams again* This is so totally and utterly COOL!! I can hardly wait for tommarow!! And how cool was that, everyone except Cade fainting. I hope Sam wakes up before they start removeing all that paint. *snickers*
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch54, Wow, I'm so surprised at how Jazz and Barricade are getting along. Everyone was worried about the Twins causing trouble. LOL. As for Sam, if all the Autobots looked up to him for killing Megatron, what's his visit with Primus gonna do? Looking forward to the next one.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot!!, Love this.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I've been following this story for the last few months and I love it! It is the greatest fic I have ever read in Transformers fandom and I have read a bit of it! I really hope you consider posting this on LJ or any other site, because wow...would the rest of the fandom love to read this.
The characterization is intriguing and I like how you keep Barricade in character, but still somewhat of a neutral guy. I actually think your prophecy writing skills are outstanding, I was on the EDGE OF MY SEAT when Optimus started telling it. I am SO glad you built up to Ironhide's confession and Will being freaked out over his thought of Not Yet and I need time to think this over instead of being rash and all HELL NO when that wouldn't have been in Will's character, despite the abnormality of the situation. I love how you spend time with each character, establishing some sort of back story or connecting us to them in someway. I am in love with Steve and Carol! <3 "This is the first resurrection I've ever been to." Fucking killed me! XD
I'm usually able to tell where a plot might be going, but your twists! The originally you're aiming for? You keep hitting it bullseye, hon.
I have a sneaking suspicion that Optimus did find his Spark Mate...in Megatron, but didn't tell anyone, especially after his betrayal. I REALLY want this to be true but I won't be too disappointed if it's not. As long as you keep doing what you're doing with this glorious piece of work. <3
147 chapters left! I was wondering how many chapters you were going to do before attempting to wrap this up, but I am extremely happy you're taking your time with this. Not only will your plot be strong, but you can obviously see the quality.
Thank you for allowing us non-members to review, I thought I would go INSANE if I couldn't give you feedback without joining the site. I have rarely enjoyed a story this much or followed it so closely, I can count them on one hand.
And last, but not least, updating. I am beyond overjoyed that you'll be updating EVERY SINGLE DAY (<3), but please don't overtax yourself. We can wait a day or three if you're tired, just take care of yourself and we'll be happy WHENEVER you update. ^.^
Can't wait for tomorrow,
B.
The characterization is intriguing and I like how you keep Barricade in character, but still somewhat of a neutral guy. I actually think your prophecy writing skills are outstanding, I was on the EDGE OF MY SEAT when Optimus started telling it. I am SO glad you built up to Ironhide's confession and Will being freaked out over his thought of Not Yet and I need time to think this over instead of being rash and all HELL NO when that wouldn't have been in Will's character, despite the abnormality of the situation. I love how you spend time with each character, establishing some sort of back story or connecting us to them in someway. I am in love with Steve and Carol! <3 "This is the first resurrection I've ever been to." Fucking killed me! XD
I'm usually able to tell where a plot might be going, but your twists! The originally you're aiming for? You keep hitting it bullseye, hon.
I have a sneaking suspicion that Optimus did find his Spark Mate...in Megatron, but didn't tell anyone, especially after his betrayal. I REALLY want this to be true but I won't be too disappointed if it's not. As long as you keep doing what you're doing with this glorious piece of work. <3
147 chapters left! I was wondering how many chapters you were going to do before attempting to wrap this up, but I am extremely happy you're taking your time with this. Not only will your plot be strong, but you can obviously see the quality.
Thank you for allowing us non-members to review, I thought I would go INSANE if I couldn't give you feedback without joining the site. I have rarely enjoyed a story this much or followed it so closely, I can count them on one hand.
And last, but not least, updating. I am beyond overjoyed that you'll be updating EVERY SINGLE DAY (<3), but please don't overtax yourself. We can wait a day or three if you're tired, just take care of yourself and we'll be happy WHENEVER you update. ^.^
Can't wait for tomorrow,
B.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, my review cut off, so here's the rest of it:
<3 "This is the first resurrection I've ever been to." Fucking killed me! XD
I'm usually able to tell where a plot might be going, but your twists! The originally you're aiming for? You keep hitting it bullseye, hon.
I have a sneaking suspicion that Optimus did find his Spark Mate...in Megatron, but didn't tell anyone, especially after his betrayal. I REALLY want this to be true but I won't be too disappointed if it's not. As long as you keep doing what you're doing with this glorious piece of work. <3
147 chapters left! I was wondering out many chapters you were going to do before attempting to wrap this up, but I am extremely happy you're taking your time with this. Not only will your plot be strong, but you can obviously see the quality.
Thank you for allowing us non-members to review, I thought I would go INSANE if I couldn't give you feedback without joining the site. I have rarely enjoyed a story this much or followed it so closely, I can count them on one hand.
And last, but not least, updating. I am beyond overjoyed that you'll be updating EVERY SINGLE DAY (<3), but please don't overtax yourself. We can wait a day or three if you're tired, just take care of yourself and we'll be happy WHENEVER you update. ^.^
Can't wait for tomorrow,
B.
<3 "This is the first resurrection I've ever been to." Fucking killed me! XD
I'm usually able to tell where a plot might be going, but your twists! The originally you're aiming for? You keep hitting it bullseye, hon.
I have a sneaking suspicion that Optimus did find his Spark Mate...in Megatron, but didn't tell anyone, especially after his betrayal. I REALLY want this to be true but I won't be too disappointed if it's not. As long as you keep doing what you're doing with this glorious piece of work. <3
147 chapters left! I was wondering out many chapters you were going to do before attempting to wrap this up, but I am extremely happy you're taking your time with this. Not only will your plot be strong, but you can obviously see the quality.
Thank you for allowing us non-members to review, I thought I would go INSANE if I couldn't give you feedback without joining the site. I have rarely enjoyed a story this much or followed it so closely, I can count them on one hand.
And last, but not least, updating. I am beyond overjoyed that you'll be updating EVERY SINGLE DAY (<3), but please don't overtax yourself. We can wait a day or three if you're tired, just take care of yourself and we'll be happy WHENEVER you update. ^.^
Can't wait for tomorrow,
B.