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Satan's Unholy Boxers!!! Now I have something to look forward to every effing day!!! You are the best!!*glomps you and shoves a plate of cookies his boyfriend made into your hands* And you don't give yourself nearly enough credit for your prophecy writing! Much better than anything I could come up with. It was very poetic, very Bible-esc! ^.~* But sadly now I need to calm my nerves and get off to bed! Can't be groggy for work, I'll be sure to review the next chapter tomorrow! I love this updating every day thing!! Best invention since pop-tarts!!

JAZZ IS BACK!!!!!!!!! Brillantly done!!! I thought it was original way to bring back Jazz. Sam's asking if he's the All Spark was hilarious, almost as funny as Jazz's comeback. Barricade seems to be mellowing the longer he stays with the Autobots, but that could be his survival instinct. I like Primus, I think you wrote his little (Well he is a god, so maybe Big? Turning point? Catalyst?) part really well. I really want to know why Sam is so special now. Did Primus use his powers to help the twin that was in trouble? What's with the red eyes? Did Megatron come back? I love your chapters so much that I can't stop asking questions. Happy Aniversary, thank you for writing a wonderful story.

OMP! That was great! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love how Jazz came back that was so cool! Best of luck with the next chapters!

I'm positively GLOWING; you just don't know!

Jazz is back and boy do we need his sense of humor and jovial manner. Prowl's personal response of "beautiful, wonderful, aggravating" was so sweet and poignant that I got that stupid smile-pout when something is so sweet and wonderful that you feel an urge to cry. I'd go even more gaga over this, but my next point is currently running naked through my head screaming Wagner's "Flight of the Valkyries".

PRIMUS, FTW! You completely trumped my previous pitiful hypothesis of some sort of freak-accident-alien-technology-explained-away plot device by bringing in one of the single most awesome and cure-all motifs, EVER. Divine intervention, and damn but does it sound like music to my ears. Your bringing in Primus, beyond being wicked awesome, sets the stage for an all new level of crazy and previously inexplicable. It's actually reasonable, which is strange because godly appearances usually fall under the deus ex machina category, but describing such a dramatic change in the Cybertronions very make up is impossible without his aid; afterall if we wanted to be so bold as to suggest something to do with the All Spark's destruction and some sort of resulting wave, we'd still be left with the MANY other Cybertronions who weren't anywhere near the vicinity when it happened and thus could not logically have been affected. When logic fails, faith picks up the slack. XD

Sweet merciful heavens, but that moment when Sam was almost accosted by the other sparks must have been nerve-rattling. And as for hearing Megatron? I'd have soiled myself.

I know it's just because I love them so much, but the fact that Will sat with 'Hide and then when he was smiling at him for the favor with the other humans made me go "ah-squee" is girlish delight.

You got a fair bit taken care of in this chapter, soundly done.
Nacht

YAY! A CHAPTER EVERYDAY! A CHAPTER EVERYDAY! I've been following your story since the very beginning and I LOVE it! I'm happy that I don't have to wait a week anymore! YAY! Keep up the great work that you always seem to dish out!

*squeals* Oh my gosh!! Jazz is back!! That was too cool. "Where's the love?" LOL!

*ponders a moment* Hmmm, I have an idea where your going when Primus mentioned Ratchet but I will say nothing and let the story unfold.

*tosses a rope to BDQ cause the story won't be finished if the croc eats the author*

Congrats on the birthday of this wonderful fic! You are one hell of a dedicated author to be able to stick with it this long, unfortunately I'm a bit to ADD for it! *^^* Seeing Jazz back was a huge sigh of relief and I can't wait to see how the reunion proceeds and what exactly is up with the lights! I doubt they are all bots waiting to be resurrected, and your warnings hold another explaination for them, can't wait to see how that all pans out! I have also a feeling Starscream will be inturrupting soon and I'm honestly not sure what I'm more excited about next! It's a tie between insane violence and the heart wrenching sap of two lovers coming together again after extraordinary tials and tribulations!! ...wow, that was surprisingly poetic... Anyway! Can't wait for next week!

Oh, wow, wow, wow!!!!! This chapter was just, wow! Jazz is back. Yes!!! Loved the interaction between Sam and Primus, but that brings up more questions. He'd known about Sam since long before the Auto-bots came to Earth? How are the Autobots going to react to the message Sam's gonna give them? Wow, can't wait for the next chapter.

This fic is the only reason I look forward to mondays. I stay up late on sundays waiting for monday to come even though I know you don't update when the clock strikes 12. I loved the scene with primus and adored how Jazz came back D: It was WAFF. I sense megatrons return.....

Omg..I can't believe you just did that.
I wanna see more of Jazz!!!! *cries*