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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just noticed you removed the "Members Only" restriction on your review button, happiness!
I am in such love with this story, I do not find all of the dialogue boring or cumbersome or irritating, it helps explain things and fleshes out characters better than just major events can. I'm so curious and filled with whimsy about the story line, but don't want to try and throw a load of hypothetical questions at you when you release the story so steadily.
I'm eager to learn about the source that caused Sunny such damage and appeared to be Energon. Hopefully this will invite a longer stay than even the Autobots anticipated.
Prowl makes me so sad, both because of the pain of such a loss and my own fondness for Jazz. The pairing is so charming, what with Prowl viewing life as Very Serious Business and Jazz's far more jovial, laid-back persona.
I'm curious as to what other pairings will manifest along the way. I so desperately want Barricade to be with someone, I'm not even going to fish for future possibilities. The whole "Mpreg" warning is keeping on my seat's edge too, I'm tireless in wondering how this will be explained as well as when it will be discovered; the bomb that'll go off will be PRICELESS!
.....So, I'm hopelessly in love with Ironhide and Will, it's so adorable and romantic(<--Just go with me on this). The portion with Ironhide contemplating how he'd resigned himself to being alone and had found and recognized these feelings he'd begun to experience for Will was so poignant. I especially when Ironhide remarked how different such a thing was, how he CHOSE to love Will, not that it'd been fated or blessed, not to say either love is more significant or meaningful as God knows I do love me some Star Links. The ONLY portion of their relationship, and I'm crossing my fingers hoping Will agrees considering we know he feels the same and if I'm wrong don't pop my bubble, that I have angst with is the tragic shortness of it. Will's human and as such will live a rough 40 more years if fortunate while a Cybertronian lives for millennia if I'm not mistaken from Barricade's assessment of how long they have before they NEED Energon and that should by no means be the end stages of their life. I've been racking my brain DESPERATELY to try and rationalize how this could be circumvented or adapted or fixed, and all I have so far is something to do with freak accidents, Cybertronian technology, strange Energon-like substances, and a pitiful noise that really doesn't want my pet couple to be torn apart by silly things like natural aging processes. I think I may have something like hope considering this is Sci-Fi, has Mpreg, and having humans that could remain with them permanently would be more practical than trying to break in new delegates, political replacements, and such every 50 years.
So much joy,
Nacht Kind
I am in such love with this story, I do not find all of the dialogue boring or cumbersome or irritating, it helps explain things and fleshes out characters better than just major events can. I'm so curious and filled with whimsy about the story line, but don't want to try and throw a load of hypothetical questions at you when you release the story so steadily.
I'm eager to learn about the source that caused Sunny such damage and appeared to be Energon. Hopefully this will invite a longer stay than even the Autobots anticipated.
Prowl makes me so sad, both because of the pain of such a loss and my own fondness for Jazz. The pairing is so charming, what with Prowl viewing life as Very Serious Business and Jazz's far more jovial, laid-back persona.
I'm curious as to what other pairings will manifest along the way. I so desperately want Barricade to be with someone, I'm not even going to fish for future possibilities. The whole "Mpreg" warning is keeping on my seat's edge too, I'm tireless in wondering how this will be explained as well as when it will be discovered; the bomb that'll go off will be PRICELESS!
.....So, I'm hopelessly in love with Ironhide and Will, it's so adorable and romantic(<--Just go with me on this). The portion with Ironhide contemplating how he'd resigned himself to being alone and had found and recognized these feelings he'd begun to experience for Will was so poignant. I especially when Ironhide remarked how different such a thing was, how he CHOSE to love Will, not that it'd been fated or blessed, not to say either love is more significant or meaningful as God knows I do love me some Star Links. The ONLY portion of their relationship, and I'm crossing my fingers hoping Will agrees considering we know he feels the same and if I'm wrong don't pop my bubble, that I have angst with is the tragic shortness of it. Will's human and as such will live a rough 40 more years if fortunate while a Cybertronian lives for millennia if I'm not mistaken from Barricade's assessment of how long they have before they NEED Energon and that should by no means be the end stages of their life. I've been racking my brain DESPERATELY to try and rationalize how this could be circumvented or adapted or fixed, and all I have so far is something to do with freak accidents, Cybertronian technology, strange Energon-like substances, and a pitiful noise that really doesn't want my pet couple to be torn apart by silly things like natural aging processes. I think I may have something like hope considering this is Sci-Fi, has Mpreg, and having humans that could remain with them permanently would be more practical than trying to break in new delegates, political replacements, and such every 50 years.
So much joy,
Nacht Kind
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, it cut me off.....
I'll begin where it ended!
.....So, I'm hopelessly in love with Ironhide and Will, it's so adorable and romantic(Just go with me on this). The portion with Ironhide contemplating how he'd resigned himself to being alone and had found and recognized these feelings he'd begun to experience for Will was so poignant. I especially when Ironhide remarked how different such a thing was, how he CHOSE to love Will, not that it'd been fated or blessed, not to say either love is more significant or meaningful as God knows I do love me some Star Links. The ONLY portion of their relationship, and I'm crossing my fingers hoping Will agrees considering we know he feels the same and if I'm wrong don't pop my bubble, that I have angst with is the tragic shortness of it. Will's human and as such will live a rough 40 more years if fortunate while a Cybertronian lives for millennia if I'm not mistaken from Barricade's assessment of how long they have before they NEED Energon and that should by no means be the end stages of their life. I've been racking my brain DESPERATELY to try and rationalize how this could be circumvented or adapted or fixed, and all I have so far is something to do with freak accidents, Cybertronian technology, strange Energon-like substances, and a pitiful noise that really doesn't want my pet couple to be torn apart by silly things like natural aging processes. I think I may have something like hope considering this is Sci-Fi, has Mpreg, and having humans that could remain with them permanently would be more practical than trying to break in new delegates, political replacements, and such every 50 years.
So much joy,
Nacht Kind
I'll begin where it ended!
.....So, I'm hopelessly in love with Ironhide and Will, it's so adorable and romantic(Just go with me on this). The portion with Ironhide contemplating how he'd resigned himself to being alone and had found and recognized these feelings he'd begun to experience for Will was so poignant. I especially when Ironhide remarked how different such a thing was, how he CHOSE to love Will, not that it'd been fated or blessed, not to say either love is more significant or meaningful as God knows I do love me some Star Links. The ONLY portion of their relationship, and I'm crossing my fingers hoping Will agrees considering we know he feels the same and if I'm wrong don't pop my bubble, that I have angst with is the tragic shortness of it. Will's human and as such will live a rough 40 more years if fortunate while a Cybertronian lives for millennia if I'm not mistaken from Barricade's assessment of how long they have before they NEED Energon and that should by no means be the end stages of their life. I've been racking my brain DESPERATELY to try and rationalize how this could be circumvented or adapted or fixed, and all I have so far is something to do with freak accidents, Cybertronian technology, strange Energon-like substances, and a pitiful noise that really doesn't want my pet couple to be torn apart by silly things like natural aging processes. I think I may have something like hope considering this is Sci-Fi, has Mpreg, and having humans that could remain with them permanently would be more practical than trying to break in new delegates, political replacements, and such every 50 years.
So much joy,
Nacht Kind
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so glad that Ironhide finally got around to telling Will how he feels, but now I hope Will comes around. Now I'm just wondering what Hide's gonna do when he gets his hands on Barricade. LOL.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAII~~!
When will Will realize a robot has a (literally) giant gay crush on him?
ME
When will Will realize a robot has a (literally) giant gay crush on him?
ME
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love the Lambos, I think Bluestreak is a good car for Keller. I want to know how Barricade painted Ironhide ^_^ and Yay! Two more autobots slowly becoming fond of Barricade. Is Ironhide finally going to figure out why he's so protective of Will?
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I feel kinda bad for the Twins :), They thought they were helping . . for once :) love to know how they signed for them though :). Thought it was cute about Beeper sleeping on Optimus' dash an how he said it kinda tickled. How in the heck did Barricade manage to paint Ironhide? Now that, I'd have to see. I think that finally broke the ice so at least he's got two that like him. Now after seeing Ironhide wisking Lennox away, everyone'd have to be blind not to their's somekind of attraction there. Now it's gonna be interesting to see how they both react to this attraction, cause I don't think either one can see it.
On a personal note. Judgeing by the hits an reviews, you've got a huge hit with this story and I love your writing style. I'm so hooked on this, I can't wait for each monday for the next chapter. (loud round of applause for you an your writing.) As always looking forward to the next chapter.
On a personal note. Judgeing by the hits an reviews, you've got a huge hit with this story and I love your writing style. I'm so hooked on this, I can't wait for each monday for the next chapter. (loud round of applause for you an your writing.) As always looking forward to the next chapter.
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Poor Ironhide. I wonder how they'll get the paint off. I must say that that was worth the wait and I look forward to next weeks chapter.
*raises a toast to the croc*
*raises a toast to the croc*
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okey, what'd the Twins do this time? :) And is their enough Autobots to protect them? LOL!! Sooo, they filled the moat with water . . . I'm almost afraid to see what they put in there.LOL.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Laughing hysterically* I love the twins antics! I want to see the rest of the bots reactions!
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say this story is FREAKING AWESOME!!! I kinda stumbled on it and thought "hey this looks neat!" so I stopped to read and I must say it's one of the best I've read in awhile. I love all the humor you use (the cactus and Mojo chasing Cade around, LOL) and I love the moments of angst (I almost cryed when Sam found out what stasis lock ment.) I really look forward to more and finding out where this story ultimately goes.
Thanks again for such a fun story!
Fields of Heather
Thanks again for such a fun story!
Fields of Heather